Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'it's have me up my mood' và sử dụng từ phù hợp hơn như 'pleasant scents' thay vì 'pleasant goods and pleasant smells'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn và rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Yes, I really love flowers because they have beautiful appearances and pleasant scents. Whenever I see them in gardens or parks, they lift my mood and help me feel more connected to nature.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều và thì động từ. Ví dụ, 'she really loves flowers', 'she has a garden', 'she grows many different types of flowers'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để tự nhiên hơn.

예시: My mother really loves flowers. She has a garden behind our house where she grows many different types of flowers, such as roses and dahlias. She spends a lot of time taking care of her garden.

제안: Câu trả lời cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng, ví dụ 'I live in a busy city', 'I only see flowers', 'I am quite busy with work and study, so I don't pay much attention to them'. Ngoài ra, nên sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I live in a busy city, so I only see flowers when I go to the park or market. In daily life, I am quite busy with work and study, so I don't pay much attention to flowers.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'taking photos of flowers', 'especially colorful and red ones'. Câu cuối nên sửa thành 'because they lift my mood and help me relax'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy taking photos of flowers whenever I see them, especially colorful and red ones. I usually save these pictures on my phone and look at them when I feel bored because they lift my mood and help me relax.

제안: Câu trả lời cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu. Ví dụ, 'Sunflowers are very common in my country, especially on special occasions like graduations, weddings, or birthdays.' và 'Sending flowers symbolizes gratitude and happiness.' Bạn nên trả lời đầy đủ câu hỏi và dùng từ phù hợp hơn.

예시: Yes, sunflowers are very common in my country, especially on special occasions like graduations, weddings, or birthdays. Sending flowers symbolizes gratitude and happiness.

× Yes, I really love flowers because most flowers have beautiful appearance and pleasant goods and pleasant smells.

✓ Yes, I really love flowers because most flowers have a beautiful appearance and pleasant smells.

The word 'goods' is incorrect here; it should be 'smells' or 'scents' to describe flowers. Also, 'beautiful appearance' needs an article 'a' before it because 'appearance' is a singular countable noun.

× Whenever I see them in the garden or in the park, it's have me up my mood and allow me to more connect with nature.

✓ Whenever I see them in the garden or in the park, it lifts my mood and allows me to connect more with nature.

The phrase 'it's have me up my mood' is grammatically incorrect. The correct expression is 'it lifts my mood'. Also, 'allow me to more connect' should be 'allows me to connect more' for correct word order and subject-verb agreement.

× This is my mother she really love flower.

✓ This is my mother; she really loves flowers.

The verb 'love' should be 'loves' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context.

× She had a garden behind my house and she grow very different type of flower like rose, dahlia.

✓ She has a garden behind my house and she grows many different types of flowers like roses and dahlias.

The verb 'had' should be 'has' if the garden still exists. 'Grow' should be 'grows' for third person singular present tense. 'Very different type' should be 'many different types' to be grammatically correct and plural. Also, flower names should be plural when referring to multiple.

× She spent more time to care her garden.

✓ She spends more time caring for her garden.

The phrase 'spent more time to care' is incorrect; it should be 'spends more time caring for'. Also, 'her garden' needs the preposition 'for' after 'caring'.

× I live in busy city so I only see flower when I go to the park or go to the market and in daily life I quite busy with my work and study so I don't pay attention them more.

✓ I live in a busy city, so I only see flowers when I go to the park or the market. In daily life, I am quite busy with my work and study, so I don't pay much attention to them.

'Busy city' needs an article 'a'. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'. The sentence is long and needs to be split for clarity. 'Pay attention them' requires the preposition 'to'. 'Don't pay attention them more' is incorrect; 'don't pay much attention to them' is correct.

× Yes, I really enjoy taking photo flowers whenever I see them, especially the colorful and red flowers.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy taking photos of flowers whenever I see them, especially colorful red flowers.

'Taking photo flowers' is incorrect; it should be 'taking photos of flowers'. Also, 'the colorful and red flowers' is better as 'colorful red flowers' without 'the'.

× I usually save this picture on my phone and look at where I feel bored because they up my mood and help me to relax.

✓ I usually save these pictures on my phone and look at them when I feel bored because they lift my mood and help me relax.

'This picture' should be plural 'these pictures' to match 'photos'. 'Look at where I feel bored' is incorrect; it should be 'look at them when I feel bored'. 'They up my mood' should be 'they lift my mood'. 'Help me to relax' is better as 'help me relax'.

× Definitely sunflower, very common in my country especially on special occasion like graduation, wedding or birthday.

✓ Definitely sunflowers are very common in my country, especially on special occasions like graduations, weddings, or birthdays.

The sentence lacks a verb and proper structure. 'Sunflower' should be plural 'sunflowers'. 'Special occasion' should be plural 'special occasions'. Also, 'graduation, wedding or birthday' should be plural and separated by commas.

× Sending flowers has a symbol like grateful, happy.

✓ Sending flowers has a symbolic meaning of gratitude and happiness.

'Has a symbol like grateful, happy' is incorrect. It should be 'has a symbolic meaning of gratitude and happiness' to express the intended meaning properly.