Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法有误，如"have"应为"has"，且句子结构稍显冗长。建议简化句子，注意主谓一致，并使用更自然的表达。

예시: Yes, I love flowers, especially Jasmine because it is beautiful, has lovely colors, and is easy to grow in my garden.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议减少重复，理清句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, my grandmother loves flowers very much. She has a small garden where she grows many kinds of flowers like Jasmine and Lily. Her garden looks very beautiful and colorful.

제안: 回答中有许多语气词和不连贯的表达，且部分句子不通顺。建议减少语气词，理清句子结构，使用恰当的连接词，并避免无意义的描述。

예시: Yes, on the first floor of my apartment building, there is a small garden with many kinds of flowers, especially Jasmine, which I really like because of its beautiful color.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议避免重复，注意时态和语法，使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Absolutely. I love flowers and photography. Taking photos of beautiful and fragrant flowers makes me happy and helps me relax.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, people often send flowers on birthdays or special occasions. For example, when I graduated this year, both my parents and friends sent me flowers as gifts.

× Yes, I'm crazy about flowers and especially Jasmine because it's beautiful and have lovely colors and it's very easy to grow in the garden.

✓ Yes, I'm crazy about flowers and especially Jasmine because it's beautiful and has lovely colors and it's very easy to grow in the garden.

这里的主语是单数的Jasmine，谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式"has"，而不是复数形式"have"。

× Oh yes, my grandpa, my grandmother, she's she she's crazy about flowers and she almost like all kinds of flowers and she has a small garden and growing with and she grows a lot of different kind of flowers like Jasmine, Lily, even some some flowers.

✓ Oh yes, my grandpa and my grandmother, they are crazy about flowers and they almost like all kinds of flowers. She has a small garden and grows a lot of different kinds of flowers like Jasmine, Lily, even some other flowers.

原句中"she's she she's"重复且混乱，且主语不一致。应将"she's she she's"改为"they are"，因为提到了爷爷和奶奶两人。"growing with"不完整，应改为"grows"。此外，"different kind"应为复数形式"different kinds"。

× Oh yes, my grandpa, my grandmother, she's she she's crazy about flowers and she almost like all kinds of flowers and she has a small garden and growing with and she grows a lot of different kind of flowers like Jasmine, Lily, even some some flowers.

✓ Oh yes, my grandpa and my grandmother, they are crazy about flowers and they almost like all kinds of flowers. She has a small garden and grows a lot of different kinds of flowers like Jasmine, Lily, even some other flowers.

"different kind"应使用复数形式"different kinds"，因为指多种花。

× Ah, yes. Uh, uh, in my apartment, uh, in the first floor, there are different kind of flowers, uh, outside in on grasses and it was a kind of like a small garden here and there are different kind of flowers and especially Jasmine, which I like, which I'm very into.

✓ Ah, yes. Uh, uh, in my apartment, on the first floor, there are different kinds of flowers outside on the grass, and it is kind of like a small garden here and there are different kinds of flowers, especially Jasmine, which I like and am very into.

"in the first floor"应改为"on the first floor"，因为楼层用介词"on"。"outside in on grasses"表达混乱，应改为"outside on the grass"。

× Ah, yes. Uh, uh, in my apartment, uh, in the first floor, there are different kind of flowers, uh, outside in on grasses and it was a kind of like a small garden here and there are different kind of flowers and especially Jasmine, which I like, which I'm very into.

✓ Ah, yes. Uh, uh, in my apartment, on the first floor, there are different kinds of flowers outside on the grass, and it is kind of like a small garden here and there are different kinds of flowers, especially Jasmine, which I like and am very into.

"different kind"应为复数形式"different kinds"，因为指多种花。

× It has very beautiful color. It was pure water.

✓ It has a very beautiful color. It is pure water.

这里描述的是现在的状态，应该用现在时态"is"，而不是过去时态"was"。

× Absolutely. I love flowers and I and also I, I was crazy about photography and taking photos of this beautiful and fragrance flowers makes me very happy and it can and it can help me to create a more interesting picture and makes me relax.

✓ Absolutely. I love flowers and I am also crazy about photography. Taking photos of these beautiful and fragrant flowers makes me very happy and it can help me create more interesting pictures and makes me relax.

"I was crazy"时态不合适，应为现在时"I am crazy"。"this beautiful and fragrance flowers"中"this"应改为复数"these"，"fragrance"应为形容词"fragrant"。

× Absolutely. I love flowers and I and also I, I was crazy about photography and taking photos of this beautiful and fragrance flowers makes me very happy and it can and it can help me to create a more interesting picture and makes me relax.

✓ Absolutely. I love flowers and I am also crazy about photography. Taking photos of these beautiful and fragrant flowers makes me very happy and it can help me create more interesting pictures and makes me relax.

"picture"应使用复数形式"pictures"，因为表达的是多张照片。

× Ah, well, yes, absolutely. And especially when you when I when people are in birthday or there are some important days and their family, their friend will send them flowers.

✓ Ah, well, yes, absolutely. Especially when people have birthdays or there are some important days, their family and friends will send them flowers.

"when people are in birthday"表达错误，应改为"when people have birthdays"。"their family, their friend"应改为复数形式"their family and friends"。

× For example, when I graduated this this year, my parents and my and my parents and my friends both send me flowers as a gift.

✓ For example, when I graduated this year, my parents and my friends both sent me flowers as a gift.

"send"应使用过去式"sent"，因为描述的是过去发生的事情。