Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，避免使用口语填充词如“umm”，并且用更准确的词汇描述花的特点。

예시: Yes, I love flowers, especially red and blue roses because of their bright colors and pleasant appearance. I often use them to decorate my home.

제안: 回答内容较好，但有重复词语“to take to take”，影响流畅度。建议注意避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, my grandmother loves planting flowers at home. Since she retired several years ago, she has had plenty of free time to take care of them.

제안: 回答中有发音错误和重复词汇“skyscraper skyscrapers”，且表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇描述环境，并注意句子结构。

예시: Actually, there aren't many flowers where I live because I live in the city center, which is full of skyscrapers and lacks greenery.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇“the the”，表达略显口语化且不够连贯。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photos, and I often post pictures of flowers on my social media.

제안: 回答中多次使用“umm”，影响流畅性。建议减少口语填充词，使用更正式和连贯的表达方式。

예시: Actually, in China, people don't often send flowers daily. However, it is common to give flowers on special occasions, especially birthdays.

× I really into flowers, you know, especially the red and blue roses since they have bright color and umm, nice smiles.

✓ I really like flowers, you know, especially the red and blue roses since they have bright colors and, umm, nice smells.

这里缺少动词，应该用动词like来表达喜欢。'into'后面需要动词-ing形式，但此处表达喜欢应使用like。'color'应为复数colors，因为指多种颜色。'smiles'应为'smells'，表示花的香味。

× And I by the way, I usually use them to decorate home.

✓ And, by the way, I usually use them to decorate my home.

'decorate home'缺少所有格，应该是'decorate my home'。另外，'by the way'前后应加逗号。

× Yes, my grandmother is obsessed with planting flowers at home since she has retired for many years and she has lots of free time to take to take care of them.

✓ Yes, my grandmother has been obsessed with planting flowers at home since she retired many years ago and she has lots of free time to take care of them.

'since she has retired for many years'时态不正确，应该用完成时态表达从过去某时开始持续到现在，且'retired'后不加'for many years'，而是'many years ago'。'to take to take care'重复，应删去一个'to take'。

× Actually not, there aren't many flowers where I leave as I live in the central city and it's full of skyscraper skyscrapers when it comes to the greenery.

✓ Actually not, there aren't many flowers where I live as I live in the central city and it's full of skyscrapers when it comes to greenery.

'where I leave'应为'where I live'，动词错误。'skyscraper skyscrapers'重复，应删去一个。'the greenery'前不需要定冠词，直接用'greenery'。

× And by the way, I usually post the the photos of the flowers in my circle of friends.

✓ And by the way, I usually post the photos of the flowers in my circle of friends.

'the the'重复，应删去一个。

× Umm, actually not in China. It is not a common phenomenon, umm, to send flowers to others on a daily basis. Umm, but in some special occasion, especially in one's birthday.

✓ Umm, actually not in China. It is not a common phenomenon, umm, to send flowers to others on a daily basis. Umm, but on some special occasions, especially on one's birthday.

'in some special occasion'应为'on some special occasions'，介词和单复数错误。生日前也应加介词'on'。