Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然，语法和表达有误，且内容较简单。建议用更自然的表达方式，避免性别刻板印象，并且增加细节说明。

예시: I don't have a strong passion for flowers, but I do appreciate their beauty and often take photos when I see particularly lovely ones.

제안: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地表达，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: Yes, my girlfriend loves flowers. When we are out, she often asks me to take pictures of her with colorful flowers because she finds them beautiful.

제안: 回答内容有些混乱，'painted'用词不当。建议用更准确的词汇描述，并且结构更清晰。

예시: Yes, there are many flowers around my school. For example, two large flower beds are planted along the road, and their fragrance makes me feel relaxed.

제안: 回答不完整且重复，语法错误明显。建议简洁明了地回答，并补充具体原因或感受。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because my girlfriend enjoys it, and I also appreciate their beauty.

제안: 回答较好，但句子断裂，表达不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子，并补充更多细节。

예시: Yes, sending flowers is a common tradition in my country. For instance, men often give roses to express romantic love, while students give lilies to teachers as a sign of respect.

× I will take pictures when I saw beautiful flowers.

✓ I will take pictures when I see beautiful flowers.

这里的时间状语从句表示将来发生的动作，主句用将来时，状语从句应使用一般现在时，而不是过去时。将来时中表示将来时间的从句不能用过去时。

× my girlfriend is a pretty flowers lover.

✓ my girlfriend is a pretty flower lover.

flower是可数名词，作为形容词修饰lover时应使用单数形式。flowers复数形式在此处不合适。

× When we are working on the road she will ask me to take pictures of her and flowers and she think the flowers are colorful that.

✓ When we are working on the road she will ask me to take pictures of her and flowers and she thinks the flowers are colorful.

主语she是第三人称单数，谓语动词think应加-s变为thinks。句末的that多余，应删除。

× there are a lot of flowers painted in my school.

✓ there are a lot of flowers planted in my school.

原句中flowers是复数，符合语法，但动词用错了，应该是planted（种植）而不是painted（画的）。此处根据语境应改为planted。

× you will see two piles of beautiful flowers planted on the road

✓ you will see two piles of beautiful flowers planted along the road

flowers复数正确，但介词用错，应该用along表示沿着路边种植花。

× my girlfriend always asked me to do that.

✓ my girlfriend always asks me to do that.

表示习惯动作时应使用一般现在时，always后面动词应用第三人称单数形式asks。

× And of course I like to take pictures also because it's very beautiful and.

✓ And of course I like to take pictures also because they are very beautiful.

句子末尾不完整，缺少宾语，且it指代不明确，改为they指代flowers更合适。

× In my country. For example, the Rose from a man is a symbol of romantic love, and Lily from the students to teachers is a symbol of respect.

✓ In my country, for example, the rose from a man is a symbol of romantic love, and lilies from students to teachers are symbols of respect.

句子断开不完整，应合并为一句。rose和lily作为普通名词不应大写。lily应用复数形式lilies，谓语动词也应相应变为are。