Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer has several grammar and vocabulary errors that affect clarity. Try to use correct words (e.g., 'pray' should be 'pray' is incorrect here; likely you meant 'like' or 'prefer') and singular/plural forms. Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses. They are my favorite because they add color and make my home feel more vibrant and welcoming.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb tenses and articles, and try to organize your ideas clearly with linking words. For example, explain the reason and then add details about her hobby and garden.

예시: Yes, my grandma loves flowers a lot. Since she recently retired, she has taken up flower arranging as a hobby, and she has planned different kinds of flowers in her entire backyard.

제안: Your answer has grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. Avoid saying 'stole' when referring to taking flowers from family; use 'borrow' or 'take'. Also, improve sentence structure and use linking words to connect ideas. Be specific about the flowers and how they affect your feelings.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. I often buy flowers from the florist or take some from my grandma's garden, which makes my home feel warm and colorful.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and using more natural expressions. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and avoid awkward phrases like 'flora' in casual speech.

예시: Not really, because I believe flowers are most beautiful when seen in person. Taking photos doesn't capture their true beauty as well as seeing them face to face.

제안: Your answer has several grammar and vocabulary errors. Use correct articles and plural forms, and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Also, use linking words to compare customs clearly and provide specific examples.

예시: Not really. There aren't many flower shops in my country, so sending flowers is less common than in Western countries. Instead, people usually send fruits or gifts on special occasions.

× Yeah, I pray like forest, especially rose. Rose is my favorite flowers and I usually get some forest at home and it just make the space more look more vibrant and liveable.

✓ Yeah, I pray like forests, especially roses. Rose is my favorite flower and I usually get some flowers at home and it just makes the space look more vibrant and livable.

The word 'forest' should be plural 'forests' to match the context of liking multiple types or instances. 'Rose' should be plural 'roses' when referring generally. 'Favorite flowers' should be singular 'favorite flower' because 'rose' is singular. 'Forest' should be 'flowers' to correctly refer to the items. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'More look more' is redundant; corrected to 'look more'. 'Liveable' is corrected to 'livable' as the more common spelling.

× Yeah, I pray like forest, especially rose. Rose is my favorite flowers and I usually get some forest at home and it just make the space more look more vibrant and liveable.

✓ Yeah, I pray like forests, especially roses. Rose is my favorite flower and I usually get some flowers at home and it just makes the space look more vibrant and livable.

The phrase 'pray like forest' is unclear and likely a misuse of preposition or word choice. It should be 'like forests' to indicate liking forests. Also, 'get some forest at home' should be 'get some flowers at home' to make sense.

× Yes, my grandma loves the flowers so much because she just retired from company and her new hobby is flower arrangement and also she got the whole backyard that is planning different kind of flowers.

✓ Yes, my grandma loves flowers so much because she just retired from the company and her new hobby is flower arrangement and also she has the whole backyard where she is planting different kinds of flowers.

'The flowers' should be 'flowers' as a general statement. 'Retired from company' needs 'the' before 'company'. 'She got' should be 'she has'. 'That is planning' should be 'where she is planting'. 'Different kind of flowers' should be 'different kinds of flowers' to be grammatically correct.

× Yeah, like I said, I usually bought some flowers at the florist store or just stole some from my grandma's house and it makes me feel very welcoming, warmth and bring the space on color.

✓ Yeah, like I said, I usually buy some flowers at the florist store or just steal some from my grandma's house and it makes me feel very welcomed, warm and brings color to the space.

'Usually bought' should be 'usually buy' to indicate habitual action in present tense. 'Stole' should be 'steal' for the same reason. 'Welcoming' should be 'welcomed' to describe feeling. 'Warmth' should be 'warm' as an adjective. 'Bring the space on color' is incorrect; corrected to 'brings color to the space'.

× Not really because I feel like flora is only beautiful when you actually looking at the real flowers like face to face and if you try to capture the beauty of it, it just didn't work out.

✓ Not really because I feel like flora is only beautiful when you are actually looking at the real flowers face to face and if you try to capture the beauty of it, it just doesn't work out.

'You actually looking' should be 'you are actually looking' to form present continuous tense. 'Didn't work out' should be 'doesn't work out' to maintain present tense consistent with 'try'.

× Not really because I feel like flora is only beautiful when you actually looking at the real flowers like face to face and if you try to capture the beauty of it, it just didn't work out.

✓ Not really because I feel like flora is only beautiful when you are actually looking at the real flowers face to face and if you try to capture the beauty of it, it just doesn't work out.

The phrase 'like face to face' is awkward; 'face to face' should be used without 'like' to correctly express direct viewing.

× Uh, not really, because we don't have so many umm, floral stores in our country. It's not like so popular as western country. So instead of sending flowers, we usually sense things like fruit or gift.

✓ Uh, not really, because we don't have many floral stores in our country. It's not as popular as in Western countries. So instead of sending flowers, we usually send things like fruit or gifts.

'So many umm' should be 'many' without 'so' for naturalness. 'It's not like so popular as western country' is incorrect; corrected to 'It's not as popular as in Western countries'. 'Sense' is a wrong word here; should be 'send'. 'Fruit or gift' should be plural 'fruit or gifts' to match 'things'.