Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误和不完整的句子，例如“I'm not very good”不明确。建议用更自然流畅的表达，并且注意时态和句子结构。

예시: Yes, I love flowers very much. They always brighten my mood when I feel down. I also enjoy growing some flowers myself because I like their beautiful shapes and pleasant smells.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“always growing”应为“always grows”，句子结构混乱。建议使用完整句子并且表达清晰。

예시: Yes, my aunt loves flowers. She always grows sunflowers and arranges beautiful flower bouquets at home, which add a lot of color to her house.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，如“Definitely years”不合适，时态混用。建议使用正确时态和更自然的表达。

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live, especially in public gardens and parks. Seeing them always uplifts my mood when I feel disappointed.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和连接词使用不当，如“and but”重复。建议简化句子并使用恰当的连接词。

예시: Not really, because I'm not fond of taking photos. However, I appreciate flower photos taken by my friends or family, and I really like them.

제안: 回答中表达较为清晰，但“first days”不明确，建议使用更具体的词汇，并注意句子流畅性。

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions such as birthdays or graduations. Flowers are a common gift to express love, respect, and to cheer others up.

× And I also grown some flowers by myself.

✓ And I also grow some flowers by myself.

这里的动词时态和形式错误，'grown'是过去分词，应该用一般现在时的动词原形'grow'，因为句子描述的是习惯性动作。

× Not just their smells, but their shape.

✓ Not just their smell, but their shape.

'smells'作为名词时通常用不可数形式'smell'，表示气味。这里应使用单数形式。

× She always growing sunflowers and arranging flowers by herself.

✓ She is always growing sunflowers and arranging flowers by herself.

'always'与进行时连用表示频繁发生的动作，动词应用现在进行时形式，即加上be动词。

× These flowers in their home at some colorful color in their home.

✓ These flowers in their home have some colorful colors.

原句缺少谓语动词，句子结构不完整，应补充谓语动词使句子完整。

× Definitely years.

✓ Definitely yes.

'years'与上下文不符，应该是肯定回答'yes'。

× especially in public garden and parks.

✓ especially in public gardens and parks.

'garden'应使用复数形式'gardens'，与'parks'保持一致。

× Whenever I see them, it will uplift my mood when I was disappointed.

✓ Whenever I see them, it uplifts my mood when I am disappointed.

时态不一致，前半句用一般现在时，后半句也应保持一致，且主语和谓语一致。

× I will appreciate the photos of flowers that took by someone close to me.

✓ I will appreciate the photos of flowers that are taken by someone close to me.

被动语态缺少助动词'are'，应使用'are taken'。

× People in my country frequently send flowers to others and it depends on occasions like first days or graduations.

✓ People in my country frequently send flowers to others, and it depends on occasions like first days or graduations.

句子中缺少逗号，连接两个独立分句时应使用逗号加连词。