Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中表达了对花的喜爱，但语言表达不够自然，且有语法错误和用词不当，如“impressionist or your paintings”应为“impressionist paintings”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they are visually stunning, much like impressionist paintings that have a strong artistic impact.

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，如“he sing Flowers are stress Busters”表达不清。建议简洁明了地表达观点，使用正确的时态和句子结构。

예시: My father loves flowers because he is very busy with work, and flowers help him relax and reduce stress.

제안: 回答结构混乱，句子不完整且语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题，并用完整句子描述具体情况，避免重复和断句错误。

예시: Yes, there are many flowers around my dormitory at school, which makes the environment very pleasant.

제안: 回答表达了观点且较为自然，但“mood Buster”用词不当，建议使用更合适的表达，如“mood booster”。同时注意时态一致性。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because they boost my mood when I feel sad, and looking at these photos helps me feel better.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达错误，如“visit in others halls”应为“visit others' homes”，且表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的表达，并补充具体细节。

예시: Yes, people often send flowers when visiting others' homes as a polite gesture, and different flowers can convey different meanings or wishes.

× Yes, I do, because flowers are a feast for the eyes, as beautiful as impressionist or your paintings which have a strong visual impact.

✓ Yes, I do, because flowers are a feast for the eyes, as beautiful as impressionist or your paintings, which have a strong visual impact.

原句中缺少逗号，导致定语从句与前面部分连接不清晰。应在“paintings”后加逗号，明确修饰关系。

× My father, because my father is busy on something, on his work he sing Flowers are stress Busters which can help him chill out.

✓ My father, because my father is busy with something, with his work he sings "Flowers are stress busters" which can help him chill out.

介词“on”用错，应使用“busy with”表示忙于某事；动词“sing”应加第三人称单数形式“sings”；“stress Busters”应小写且加引号表示引用。

× Yes, I lived in school in the vicinity of my dormitory.

✓ Yes, I live in school in the vicinity of my dormitory.

此处描述现在的居住情况，应使用一般现在时“live”，而非过去时“lived”。

× In the school. There are so many flowers my.

✓ In the school, there are so many flowers near my dormitory.

原句断句不当且语序错误，应合并为一句并调整词序，使句子通顺且表达完整。

× When people visit in others halls, it is a polite way to take some gifts, especially like flowers and fruits because different kind of flowers can express different expectation.

✓ When people visit others' homes, it is polite to bring some gifts, especially flowers and fruits, because different kinds of flowers can express different expectations.

“visit in others halls”错误，应为“visit others' homes”；“take some gifts”应为“bring some gifts”；“different kind”应为复数“different kinds”；“expectation”应为复数“expectations”。