Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 내용이 명확하지 않습니다. 'bee'와 'flower'의 철자 오류와 문장 구조 개선이 필요합니다. 또한, 간결하고 명확한 주제 문장과 구체적인 이유를 포함하여 답변을 구성하세요.

예시: I don't love flowers because I am afraid of bees. When I was young, I was stung by a bee, so I tend to avoid flowers to prevent getting stung again.

제안: 답변이 다소 어색하고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'red robes'는 'red roses'로 수정해야 하며, 감정을 표현할 때 더 자연스러운 표현을 사용하세요. 또한, 연결어를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 만드세요.

예시: Yes, my mom loves flowers, especially red roses, because they symbolize love and bring her joy.

제안: 답변이 이해하기 어렵고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 꽃이 많은지 여부와 그 이유를 명확하게 설명하세요. 불필요한 단어는 제거하고 간결하게 표현하세요.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live, especially in early spring when plants start to bloom.

제안: 문법과 어휘 사용에 오류가 많고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 'skilled bees'는 'afraid of bees'로 수정하고, 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 만드세요. 또한, 이유를 자연스럽게 연결하세요.

예시: Not really, because I am afraid of bees, so I don't get close to flowers to take pictures.

제안: 답변이 비교적 명확하지만, 더 자연스럽고 풍부한 표현을 위해 연결어와 구체적인 예시를 추가하세요. 또한, 문장 구조를 개선하여 유창성을 높이세요.

예시: No, people in my country usually give flowers only on special occasions, such as anniversaries and birthdays.

× when I was young I shocked from the bee

✓ when I was young I was stung by a bee

The verb 'shocked' is incorrect in this context. The correct past tense verb to describe being hurt by a bee is 'was stung'. Also, the preposition 'from' is incorrect; 'by' is used to indicate the agent causing the action.

× So I hate flour because of the bee

✓ So I hate flowers because of the bee

The word 'flour' (a powder used in cooking) is incorrect here. The correct word is 'flowers' (plural), which matches the context of the conversation about flowers and bees.

× who loves flowers is my mom

✓ the person who loves flowers is my mom

The sentence lacks a subject before 'who'. Adding 'the person' clarifies the subject and improves sentence structure.

× She loves those, especially red robes because those can give her the love and joyful

✓ She loves them, especially red roses because they can give her love and joy

'Robes' is incorrect; the intended word is 'roses'. Also, 'those' should be replaced with 'them' to refer to flowers. 'Joyful' is an adjective; the noun 'joy' is appropriate here.

× there are very many times for you because Samsung is grow up in early spring

✓ there are many flowers because they grow in early spring

'Very many times for you' is incorrect and unclear. 'Samsung' is likely a mishearing or typo. The correct phrase is 'there are many flowers because they grow in early spring'.

× Samsung is grow up in early spring

✓ flowers grow in early spring

The phrase 'Samsung is grow up' is grammatically incorrect. The correct present tense form is 'flowers grow'.

× I'm not come close the flower so I can take the picture well

✓ I don't come close to the flowers so I can't take good pictures

'I'm not come' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I don't come'. Also, 'close the flower' should be 'close to the flowers'. The modal verb 'can' is used incorrectly; 'can't' fits the negative meaning.