Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to use the present tense consistently and avoid minor grammatical errors. Also, you can add linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: Yes, I love flowers. My favorite flowers are dandelions, sunflowers, and roses because they give me pleasure and happiness whenever I see them in the garden.

제안: Try to improve grammar and vocabulary accuracy, for example, use plural forms correctly and choose the right words (e.g., 'pollen' instead of 'choline'). Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I think many people love flowers, especially those who are in love and use flowers to express their feelings to others. Besides that, many insects like honey bees and butterflies collect pollen from flowers, which helps with pollination.

제안: Focus on correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Use plural forms properly and avoid confusing plant categories (non-flowering plants do not have flowers). Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, where I live, there are many varieties of flowers such as roses, Rhode Island lilies, sunflowers, and many more. These flowers have vibrant colors that attract a large number of visitors.

제안: Improve word choice and grammar, for example, use 'flowers' in plural and 'lighting' instead of 'lightning'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas clearly.

예시: Yes, I usually take selfies with beautiful flowers because they add a natural effect and good lighting to my photos. Moreover, looking at these photos helps reduce my stress.

제안: Pay attention to spelling and word choice (e.g., 'flowers' instead of 'floor', 'express' instead of 'space'). Also, clarify festival names and use linking words for better flow.

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, especially during festivals like Baisakhi, Eid, and Dashain. Flowers are widely regarded as symbols of peace and happiness, and people like to express their feelings of affection and goodwill through them.

× My favorite flowers are dandelions, sunflower, and rose because they gave me pleasure and happiness when I saw them in the garden.

✓ My favorite flowers are dandelions, sunflowers, and roses because they give me pleasure and happiness when I see them in the garden.

The nouns 'sunflower' and 'rose' should be plural to match the plural subject 'flowers'. Also, the verbs 'gave' and 'saw' should be in present tense 'give' and 'see' to agree with the present tense context of loving flowers.

× Yes I think many people love flower especially those people who are in love and use flower to express their feeling to other.

✓ Yes, I think many people love flowers especially those people who are in love and use flowers to express their feelings to others.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match 'many people love'. Also, 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' and 'other' should be plural 'others' to agree with the plural context.

× Apart from that many insect like honey bee, butterfly and many more use flower to collect choline and they also have pollination.

✓ Apart from that, many insects like honey bees, butterflies and many more use flowers to collect pollen and they also help in pollination.

The nouns 'insect', 'honey bee', 'butterfly', and 'flower' should be plural to agree with 'many'. 'Choline' is incorrect; the correct word is 'pollen'. Also, 'have pollination' is incorrect; 'help in pollination' is better.

× Yes, the place where I live consists of wide varieties of flower ranging from flowering to non flowering plant like RO, rose, Rhode Island, fancy Lily, sunflower and many more.

✓ Yes, the place where I live consists of a wide variety of flowers ranging from flowering to non-flowering plants like RO, rose, Rhode Island, fancy lily, sunflower and many more.

'Varieties' should be singular 'variety' when preceded by 'a wide'. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'Plant' should be plural 'plants'. Also, 'non flowering' should be hyphenated as 'non-flowering'.

× This flower has a vibrant color that attract a lot number of visitor.

✓ These flowers have vibrant colors that attract a lot of visitors.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context. 'Color' should be plural 'colors' to agree with 'flowers'. 'Attract' should be 'attracts' if singular, but since subject is plural, 'attract' is correct. 'A lot number of visitor' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'a lot of visitors'.

× Yes, I usually take a selfie with beautiful flower as they bring natural effect and lightning to my photo.

✓ Yes, I usually take a selfie with beautiful flowers as they bring a natural effect and lighting to my photo.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to agree with 'they'. 'Lightning' is incorrect; the correct word is 'lighting'. Also, 'natural effect' should be preceded by 'a'.

× Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others especially during festivals like Bihar, Eid, Dosai and many more.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others especially during festivals like Bihu, Eid, Dosai and many more.

'Bihar' is a place, likely intended to be 'Bihu', a festival. No plural issue here but correction for accuracy.

× Floor are widely regarded as symbol of peace and happiness and people like space their feeling of affection and goodwill.

✓ Flowers are widely regarded as symbols of peace and happiness and people like to express their feelings of affection and goodwill.

'Floor' is a typo; should be 'Flowers'. 'Are' agrees with plural 'flowers'. 'Symbol' should be plural 'symbols'. 'Space' is incorrect; should be 'express'. 'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings'.