Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I love flowers very much. I enjoy exploring different kinds of flowers, especially those I have never seen before. For example, when I was a child, I saw a rose for the first time and felt very excited and happy.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words to connect your points. Be specific about who loves flowers and why.

예시: Yes, I know my roommate who loves flowers. She gave me a red rose on my birthday because she believes flowers are memorable and a beautiful gift for loved ones.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Focus on giving a clear, direct answer with specific examples. Use linking words to list the types of flowers near your home.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. For instance, near my house, I often see roses, marigolds, China roses, and hibiscus flowers.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to answer directly and explain when and why you take photos of flowers, using linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: I don't usually take photos of flowers every day. However, when I visit a garden or travel to a special place, I like to take pictures of flowers because they are beautiful and unique.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand. Provide a clear response with specific examples and use linking words to explain why people send flowers.

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others. For example, they give red roses on birthdays because flowers are considered memorable and meaningful gifts.

× I always like to explore the different kind of flowers, which I never.

✓ I always like to explore the different kinds of flowers, which I never have seen.

The noun 'kind' should be plural 'kinds' because it refers to multiple types of flowers. Also, 'flowers' is plural, so 'kinds' must agree in number. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement and proper pluralization.

× Which I never.

✓ Which I have never seen.

The sentence fragment 'Which I never.' is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding 'have never seen' completes the thought and forms a proper relative clause.

× The first time when I was a child I saw the Rose flower, I was very exciting and full of enjoy at them.

✓ The first time when I was a child, I saw the rose flower; I was very excited and full of joy at it.

'Exciting' is an adjective describing something that causes excitement, but here the student wants to express their feeling, so 'excited' is correct. 'Enjoy' is a verb; the noun 'joy' fits better here. Also, 'rose flower' should be lowercase unless part of a proper noun, and 'at them' should be 'at it' since 'flower' is singular.

× she loves the flowers allowed her she gave me last time she came in the flower red rose flower booking on my birthday party because she.

✓ She loves flowers; last time she came, she gave me a red rose flower as a gift for my birthday party because she...

The original sentence is confusing and contains incorrect prepositions and word order. 'Allowed her' is incorrect; likely intended 'and she gave me'. 'Came in the flower red rose flower booking' is unclear; corrected to 'gave me a red rose flower as a gift'. Proper prepositions and sentence structure improve clarity.

× Enjoys that the flowers are memorable and a beautiful thing to give to give to the beloved 1.

✓ She enjoys that flowers are memorable and a beautiful thing to give to a beloved one.

'Enjoys that the flowers' is awkward; 'she enjoys that flowers' is clearer. 'To give to give' is repetitive; one 'to give' suffices. 'Beloved 1' should be 'beloved one'. Correct pronoun and article usage improves sentence clarity.

× Yes absolutely get a different writings of floods where I live right now so I'm living in more conducive to so there are so many past close to my house so that always follow flowers such as roses, marigolds, China rose, mapper leaves, etc.

✓ Yes, absolutely, there are different varieties of flowers where I live right now. I'm living in Moradabad, so there are many plants close to my house that always have flowers such as roses, marigolds, China rose, maple leaves, etc.

'Writings of floods' is incorrect; likely meant 'varieties of flowers'. 'Past close to my house' should be 'plants close to my house'. 'Follow flowers' is incorrect; 'have flowers' is appropriate. Correct plural forms and vocabulary improve meaning.

× I do not take photos of last Monday night because it's something.

✓ I did not take photos last Monday night because it was nothing special.

The sentence uses present tense 'do not take' incorrectly for a past event. 'Last Monday night' requires past tense 'did not take'. Also, 'because it's something' is unclear; 'because it was nothing special' clarifies the reason.

× When I go to a special purpose such as the garden and the water too far, I would travel to take pictures at that time because there's the specific name for specificity or the time when I.

✓ When I go for a special purpose, such as to a garden or a waterfall that is far away, I travel to take pictures because there is a specific time or reason for it.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting prepositions ('go for a special purpose'), clarifying locations ('garden or waterfall'), and completing the thought improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Absolutely. The people of my country often sent us orders because.

✓ Absolutely. The people of my country often send flowers to others because...

'Sent' is past tense, but 'often' indicates habitual action, so present tense 'send' is correct. 'Sent us orders' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'send flowers to others'.

× It's a memorable and others for example, so last time I cleaned the red ready for red flower working environment on our birthday party because I feel.

✓ It's memorable and meaningful. For example, last time I received a red rose flower at a work event on our birthday party because I feel...

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Cleaned the red ready for red flower working environment' is nonsensical; likely intended 'received a red rose flower at a work event'. Correcting sentence structure and vocabulary improves clarity.