Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は直接的で自然ですが、'the living flowers'の表現が不自然です。'living flowers'は通常使わず、'fresh flowers'や'flowers in bloom'の方が適切です。また、回答が少し冗長なので簡潔にしましょう。

예시: Yes, I love flowers. I enjoy both buying fresh flowers and seeing them bloom in nature.

제안: 文法ミスが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。'heart own beauty salon shop'は不自然で、'her own beauty salon'が正しいです。'she always buy sunflower'は主語と動詞の一致が間違っています。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より論理的にしましょう。

예시: Yes, my grandmother owns her own beauty salon. She always buys flowers for the salon, especially sunflowers in summer, which brighten up the place. I really enjoy seeing them.

제안: 文が不完全で意味が不明瞭です。'I live. Very near the beach'は不自然で、'I live very near the beach'が正しいです。'it's a little bit hard that flowery grow'は文法的に誤りです。'Instead of flowers, I can see many trees along the beach'のように具体的に説明しましょう。

예시: I live very near the beach, so it's a bit difficult for flowers to grow there. Instead, I can see many trees along the beach, which I really like.

제안: 文法と表現に多くの誤りがあります。'I often. Take photos'は不自然で、'I often take photos'が正しいです。'she doesn't hate picture that much'は意味が曖昧で、'she likes pictures'などに変えましょう。文をつなげて論理的に話しましょう。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers when I go to the beach. I always send the pictures to my mom because she likes them and it makes her happy.

제안: 文が断片的で意味が伝わりにくいです。'Sutchar's'は誤りで、'such as'が正しいです。'further state'も不自然です。文化について具体的に説明し、接続詞を使って文をつなげましょう。

예시: I think Japanese people don't often send flowers casually. However, on special occasions such as Mother's Day and wedding anniversaries, they usually give specific flowers.

× I love both buying flowers and the living flowers.

✓ I love both buying flowers and living flowers.

The article 'the' before 'living flowers' is unnecessary here because 'living flowers' is a general term, not a specific set of flowers. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× My grandmother has heart own beauty salon shop.

✓ My grandmother has her own beauty salon shop.

The possessive pronoun 'her' is needed before 'own' to indicate ownership. 'Heart' is a typo and should be 'her'. This corrects the pronoun usage and spelling.

× In the summer she always buy sunflower that makes the shop brighten up and I love seeing that.

✓ In the summer she always buys sunflowers that make the shop brighten up, and I love seeing that.

The verb 'buy' should be 'buys' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'. 'Sunflower' should be plural 'sunflowers' because it refers to multiple flowers. Also, 'that makes' should be 'that make' to agree with plural 'sunflowers'. Added a comma before 'and' for clarity.

× I live. Very near the beach so it's a little bit hard that flowery grow but instant of flowers I can see all the of tree.

✓ I live very near the beach, so it's a little bit hard for flowers to grow, but instead of flowers, I can see all the trees.

The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect word usage. 'I live.' is incomplete; it should be connected to the next clause. 'Flowery' is incorrect; it should be 'flowers'. 'Instant' should be 'instead'. 'All the of tree' should be 'all the trees'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Along the beach side and I love think that.

✓ Along the beachside, and I love that.

'I love think that' is incorrect; it should be 'I love that'. Also, 'beach side' is better written as one word 'beachside'. The sentence is simplified for clarity.

× Yes, I often. Take photos of flowers when I go to the beach.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of flowers when I go to the beach.

The period after 'often' incorrectly breaks the sentence. The verb 'take' should be connected to 'I often' to form a complete sentence.

× And and I always send the picture to my mom because she doesn't hate picture that much.

✓ And I always send pictures to my mom because she doesn't hate pictures that much.

Repeated 'and' is a mistake. 'The picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'that much' implying multiple pictures. Also, 'picture' should be plural in both places for consistency.

× But she's happy that. She is happy to.

✓ But she's happy about that. She is happy too.

The original sentences are incomplete and unclear. 'Happy that' should be 'happy about that'. 'She is happy to' is incomplete; 'too' is the correct word to express agreement.

× I think Japanese people. Don't have that culture.

✓ I think Japanese people don't have that culture.

The period after 'people' incorrectly breaks the sentence. It should be one sentence without a period.

× To give flowers to someone that much but in the anniversary Sutchar's Mother's Day wedding anniversary further state they.

✓ To give flowers to someone that much, but on anniversaries such as Mother's Day and wedding anniversaries, they...

'In the anniversary' should be 'on anniversaries'. 'Sutchar's' is likely a typo for 'such as'. 'Further state they' is unclear and incomplete; the sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× Have a specific flowers to give.

✓ have specific flowers to give.

'A specific flowers' is incorrect because 'flowers' is plural and should not have the singular article 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the sentence.