Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý tốt hơn. Ví dụ, bạn nên nói rõ lý do yêu hoa và mô tả cụ thể hơn về hoa mà bạn thích.

예시: Yes, I really love flowers because they create spectacular views with their bright and colorful petals. For example, on clear days with blue skies, the flowers look even more beautiful and lively.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về người bạn biết yêu hoa.

예시: Yes, my mom loves flowers very much. She enjoys gardening and takes care of many beautiful flowers that grow in our backyard every day.

제안: Câu trả lời cần được tổ chức tốt hơn với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác hơn để mô tả về hoa và các hoạt động liên quan.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. In my neighborhood, we often organize flower growing competitions, and many people plant different kinds of flowers such as roses.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy mô tả cụ thể hơn về việc bạn có chụp ảnh hoa hay không và trong hoàn cảnh nào.

예시: Not really, but sometimes when I hang out with my friends at a coffee shop, I like to take photos of the colorful flowers there because they look very beautiful.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên và chính xác hơn. Hãy nói rõ hơn về các dịp mà người Việt Nam thường tặng hoa và ý nghĩa của việc tặng hoa.

예시: Well, in Vietnam, people often send flowers to others on special occasions such as holidays, weddings, or birthdays. This tradition is popular because flowers symbolize good luck and happiness.

× Yes, I really love flowers because it's great create spectacular views with their bright and colorful pettles.

✓ Yes, I really love flowers because they create spectacular views with their bright and colorful petals.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'it's great create' instead of the correct verb form. The phrase should be 'they create' to properly link the subject 'flowers' with the verb. Also, 'pettles' is a spelling error; the correct word is 'petals'.

× For example, when we when the sky is clear and blue with few clouds, flowers Flowers made cenarius even move Verify MPs.

✓ For example, when the sky is clear and blue with few clouds, flowers create a beautiful scenery that can even move people.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains nonsensical phrases like 'flowers Flowers made cenarius even move Verify MPs.' It lacks proper sentence structure and clarity. The correction provides a coherent and meaningful sentence.

× Yes my mom she is very love flowers.

✓ Yes, my mom loves flowers very much.

The original sentence redundantly uses both 'my mom' and 'she' as subjects, which is incorrect. Also, 'is very love' is grammatically wrong; the verb 'love' should be conjugated properly as 'loves'.

× She is enjoy gardening and take care of many Kleffel flowers that ** *** groved in our backyard everyday is.

✓ She enjoys gardening and takes care of many colorful flowers that grow in our backyard every day.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'is enjoy' instead of 'enjoys' and 'take' instead of 'takes' to agree with the third person singular subject 'She'. 'Groved' is not a correct past tense; the correct verb is 'grow'. Also, 'everyday is' is incorrect; it should be 'every day'.

× Every is morning I finish is very less and Britain is our home.

✓ Every morning, I finish quickly, and Britain is our home.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors like 'Every is morning' and 'I finish is very less'. The correction clarifies the intended meaning with proper sentence structure.

× Yes, there are a lot of flowers where I live is a special is in my neighborhood, we often organized a flower going competitions which is in gross.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers where I live. It is special because in my neighborhood, we often organize flower-growing competitions which are very popular.

The original sentence misuses 'is' and has awkward phrasing. 'There are' is correctly used but followed by incorrect sentence fragments. The correction separates ideas and uses proper verb forms and articles.

× Many people to plant different kind of flowers as that roses have some flowers.

✓ Many people plant different kinds of flowers such as roses and other types.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'to plant' and 'different kind' (should be plural 'kinds'). The phrase 'as that roses have some flowers' is unclear and incorrect. The correction uses proper quantifiers and clearer phrasing.

× Not really, but sometime when I hang out with my friends have cough per coffee which is Nima has and I like to test photos on.

✓ Not really, but sometimes when I hang out with my friends and have coffee, I like to take photos of colorful flowers.

The original sentence has multiple errors including missing conjunctions and incorrect verb forms like 'test photos on' instead of 'take photos of'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. The correction improves clarity and grammar.

× Of the colorful flowers in the color, color best colorful roses look very nice.

✓ The colorful flowers, especially the best-colored roses, look very nice.

The original sentence is repetitive and awkwardly constructed with phrases like 'color, color best colorful'. The correction uses proper adjective order and removes redundancy.

× Well in Vietnam people often saying flower to Arthur on special ocassions set it at holiday wedding or Prince birthday.

✓ Well, in Vietnam, people often send flowers to others on special occasions such as holidays, weddings, or birthdays.

The original sentence misuses 'saying flower to Arthur' which is incorrect. The correct verb is 'send' and 'others' instead of 'Arthur'. Also, 'set it at' is incorrect and replaced with 'such as'.

× This changing change traditional popular because flowers symbol is good lucky and hapiness.

✓ This tradition is popular because flowers symbolize good luck and happiness.

The original sentence has incorrect word forms like 'changing change traditional popular' and 'symbol is good lucky and hapiness'. The correction uses proper nouns and verbs and correct spelling.