Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意单词拼写和用法。可以先直接回答问题，再补充具体原因。

예시: I don't love flowers much, but I find their bright colors and lovely smells very fascinating.

제안: 回答中语法混乱，表达不清晰，建议使用简单句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使句子连贯。注意单词拼写，如plants而非 plans。

예시: Yes, my parents and grandmother love flowers. They not only enjoy looking at them but also like planting them. Their room is full of colorful flowers with pleasant smells.

제안: 回答中存在词汇错误（guns应为kinds），句子不连贯，建议先直接回答，再用具体细节支持，避免无意义的句子。

예시: Yes, there are many flowers around my apartment. We have different kinds and colors, like red and blue. I especially like blue flowers because they make me feel fresh.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使句子流畅。

예시: I don't usually take photos of flowers, but sometimes I do when the background and lighting are good. However, such opportunities are rare during the daytime.

제안: 回答语法错误严重，表达不完整，建议先直接回答问题，再用具体例子或原因支持，注意句子完整和逻辑连贯。

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to show appreciation or to apologize. Flowers are also used to express happiness on special occasions.

× I'm quite, really interesting to look in floors.

✓ I'm quite, really interested in looking at flowers.

这里应该使用形容词 'interested' 来表达兴趣，而不是 'interesting'。此外，'look in floors' 是错误的表达，正确的说法是 'looking at flowers'。

× I'm quite, really interesting to look in floors.

✓ I'm quite, really interested in looking at flowers.

介词使用错误，应该用 'interested in' 表示对某事感兴趣，'look in floors' 应改为 'looking at flowers'。

× Quite fascinated about its bright color and it's lovely smell, which is the thing that really attract me.

✓ I'm quite fascinated by their bright colors and their lovely smell, which is the thing that really attracts me.

代词使用错误，flowers 是复数，应该用 'their' 而不是 'its'。此外，'attract' 应该用第三人称单数形式 'attracts'。

× which is the thing that really attract me.

✓ which is the thing that really attracts me.

主语是单数 'thing'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'attracts'。

× I believe that turn my parents and my grandmother is really into flowers, are not only looking at it and appreciate about it, they also are very keen on planting dead.

✓ I believe that my parents and my grandmother are really into flowers; they not only look at and appreciate them, but they are also very keen on planting them.

代词使用错误，flowers 是复数，应该用 'them'。此外，句子结构混乱，需要调整。

× I believe that turn my parents and my grandmother is really into flowers, are not only looking at it and appreciate about it, they also are very keen on planting dead.

✓ I believe that my parents and my grandmother are really into flowers; they not only look at and appreciate them, but they are also very keen on planting them.

主语 'my parents and my grandmother' 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 'are'。

× appreciate about it

✓ appreciate it

动词 'appreciate' 后不需要介词 'about'。

× Their room is full of plans and flowers and why goes into their room.

✓ Their room is full of plants and flowers, and when I go into their room,

代词使用错误，'why' 应为 'when I'，且 'plans' 应为 'plants'。

× I can always see the bright color and allowed the smell of them.

✓ I can always see the bright colors and smell their lovely fragrance.

'allowed' 是错误的词，应为 'allow' 或改为 'smell'。此外，'color' 应为复数 'colors'，代词使用需准确。

× I believe that my apartment have lots of flowers.

✓ I believe that my apartment has lots of flowers.

主语 'my apartment' 是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式 'has'。

× I produce that we have all kinds of guns and all kinds of colors such as red, blue and I believe that my favorite is blue because it gave me the fresh feeling.

✓ I suppose that we have all kinds of plants and all kinds of colors such as red and blue, and I believe that my favorite is blue because it gives me a fresh feeling.

'produce' 应为 'suppose'，'guns' 应为 'plants'。动词时态和冠词使用也需调整。

× because it gave me the fresh feeling.

✓ because it gives me a fresh feeling.

描述习惯性事实时应使用一般现在时 'gives'，而非过去时 'gave'。

× And I quite like it. Why? How? Lots of flowers around me.

✓ And I quite like it because there are lots of flowers around me.

句子不完整，缺少连接词和主谓结构，需补充完整。

× I don't usually take photos about flowers in my daily life and actually not quite keen into it, but I sometimes take pictures of them where how quite a good background and how the appropriate light.

✓ I don't usually take photos of flowers in my daily life and I'm actually not quite keen on it, but I sometimes take pictures of them when there is quite a good background and appropriate light.

介词和表达方式错误，'keen into' 应为 'keen on'，'photos about' 应为 'photos of'。

× I don't usually take photos about flowers

✓ I don't usually take photos of flowers

动词 'take photos' 后应接介词 'of'，表示拍摄对象。

× These situations is hard to find so I don't see really take flowers at daytime.

✓ These situations are hard to find, so I don't really take photos of flowers during the daytime.

主谓不一致，'situations' 是复数，谓语应为 'are'。句子结构混乱，需调整。

× These situations is hard to find

✓ These situations are hard to find

主语 'situations' 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 'are'。

× I think people in my country you did do that well,

✓ I think people in my country do that well,

多余的 'you did' 使句子不通顺，应删除。

× and flowers is also a great way to express peoples happy buildings and it's also.

✓ and flowers are also a great way to express people's happiness, and they are also...

'flowers' 是复数，谓语动词应为 'are'。'peoples' 应为 'people's' 表示所有格。句子未完成，需补充。