Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более связным и естественным. Избегайте коротких и прерывистых предложений, используйте полные предложения и объясняйте свою точку зрения более подробно.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy flowers because they symbolize the beauty of nature and bring joy to people's lives.

제안: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и нечетких выражений. Следует использовать связные предложения и правильные времена, а также избегать лишних слов.

예시: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much. She grows many flowers in her garden, especially red and white roses, and she really enjoys taking care of them.

제안: Ответ неясен и содержит много ошибок. Следует строить предложения логично, использовать связующие слова и конкретные детали.

예시: No, the environment where I live is not suitable for growing flowers. However, in the nearby park, there are different kinds of trees and shrubs that people enjoy.

제안: Ответ можно сделать более плавным и связным, избегая прерывистых предложений и повторов.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of flowers because they represent natural beauty. I prefer photographing flowers rather than people or cars because I find them more beautiful.

제안: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и нечетких выражений. Следует использовать полные предложения и более точные слова.

예시: Yes, many people in my country order flower deliveries to show sympathy or appreciation to others. I think it is a good gesture to express love and care.

× Yes, I really enjoy the flowers. Because they are the symbol of. Beauty in the nature.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy flowers because they are a symbol of beauty in nature.

The original sentences are fragmented and incorrectly structured. 'Because they are the symbol of. Beauty in the nature.' is a sentence fragment and contains unnecessary periods. Also, 'the flowers' is unnecessarily specific; 'flowers' is more natural here. 'The nature' should be 'nature' without the article. The corrected sentence combines the ideas into one coherent sentence.

× Ah yes, my mother in love is front of flowers, say that she grow a lot of flowers in there. In her garden. Especially roses, red and white ones. And then she really. Enjoy.

✓ Ah yes, my mother-in-law loves flowers; she says that she grows a lot of flowers in her garden, especially red and white roses. And she really enjoys them.

The phrase 'my mother in love' should be 'my mother-in-law'. 'Is front of flowers' is incorrect; it should be 'loves flowers'. 'Say' should be 'says' to agree with the third person singular subject. 'Grow' should be 'grows' for subject-verb agreement. 'In there' is vague; 'in her garden' is clearer. Sentence fragments like 'Especially roses, red and white ones.' and 'And then she really. Enjoy.' are corrected into complete sentences. Pronouns are clarified for coherence.

× No, in the environment where I live, not not inconvenient for growing, for planting flowers, but in the park Santa yards we can meet. Different kinds of trees. And drops shrubs. And also people.

✓ No, the environment where I live is not convenient for growing or planting flowers, but in the parks and yards, we can find different kinds of trees and shrubs, and also people.

The phrase 'not not inconvenient' is likely a mistake; it should be 'not convenient'. 'For growing, for planting flowers' is better expressed as 'for growing or planting flowers'. 'Park Santa yards' is unclear; likely intended 'parks and yards'. 'We can meet' is incorrect; 'we can find' is appropriate. 'Drops shrubs' is incorrect; 'shrubs' is sufficient. The sentence fragments are combined into a coherent sentence.

× Yes, many people in my country. Ordering delivery flowers to others to show their sympathy or the appreciations to blow it persons of them, I think that good gesture. To show love from using.

✓ Yes, many people in my country order flower deliveries to others to show their sympathy or appreciation to those people. I think that is a good gesture to show love.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'Ordering delivery flowers' should be 'order flower deliveries'. 'The appreciations' should be 'appreciation'. 'To blow it persons of them' is unclear and incorrect; corrected to 'to those people'. Sentence fragments are combined into complete sentences. Prepositions and word choices are corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.