Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use correct grammar and sentence structure to make your answer clearer and more natural. Avoid redundancy and ensure your examples are relevant and well-explained. For instance, instead of 'there is suiting fragrance', say 'they have a pleasant fragrance'. Also, clarify your examples smoothly within the sentence.

예시: Yes, I love flowers a lot because of their vibrant colours and pleasant fragrance. For example, I really enjoy the scent of roses, and lavender is my favourite fragrance in body wash products.

제안: Focus on clear and coherent sentences. Avoid fragmented or unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, correct grammar and vocabulary usage will improve clarity. For example, explain why your husband loves flowers and how he expresses it.

예시: Yes, my husband loves flowers a lot too. He believes that appreciating flowers is part of his nature, and he thinks giving flowers is the best way to express love to someone.

제안: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, correct verb tenses and prepositions will make your answer more natural. For example, instead of repeating 'over there', use synonyms or restructure sentences.

예시: Yes, there is a public garden near my home that has a wide variety of flowers. My husband and I often visit it to spend quality time and relax from our hectic schedules.

제안: Use more natural expressions and correct grammar. Avoid awkward phrases like 'much more better'. Also, explain your opinion clearly and logically with linking words.

예시: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because I prefer to spend time enjoying their scent and presence instead of just capturing their image.

제안: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary accuracy. Use correct articles and plural forms, and avoid unclear phrases like 'gifted him up bunch of bookie'. Also, provide specific examples with correct linking words.

예시: Actually, it is a tradition in my country to give flowers as gifts to loved ones, especially when attending parties or dinners. For example, the last time I visited my uncle's home, I gave him a beautiful bouquet of flowers.

× Yes, I love flower a lot.

✓ Yes, I love flowers a lot.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to flowers in general, not a single flower.

× I love their vibrant color and there is suiting fragrance.

✓ I love their vibrant colour and their soothing fragrance.

The adjective 'suiting' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'soothing' to describe fragrance. Also, 'there is' is incorrect here; it should be 'their' to indicate possession.

× For example. I love the roses smell for the fragrance and the lavender Ford my body wash.

✓ For example, I love the smell of roses and the lavender in my body wash.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. 'Roses smell for the fragrance' should be 'the smell of roses'. 'Ford' is a typo and should be 'for'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, my husband, he also loved a lot. To the flowers.

✓ Yes, my husband also loves flowers a lot.

The verb 'loved' is past tense but the context suggests present tense. Also, 'to the flowers' is incorrect and unnecessary.

× He said Lee. It is also the part of her nature is weird.

✓ He said it is also part of his nature.

'Lee' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. 'Her' should be 'his' to match 'my husband'. The phrase 'is weird' is unnecessary and confusing.

× It is a best and also select.

✓ It is the best and also special.

'A best' is incorrect; 'best' is a superlative adjective and should be preceded by 'the'. 'Select' is incorrect here; 'special' fits the context better.

× It is the best way to express your love to someone else.

✓ It is the best way to express your love to someone else.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× Oh yes, there's a public garden where I live, and in that one we have a lot of flowers, but we have a variety of flowers over there.

✓ Oh yes, there's a public garden where I live, and in it we have a lot of flowers; we have a variety of flowers there.

'In that one' is awkward; 'in it' is better. 'Over there' is less appropriate than 'there' in this context.

× Anne. Me and my husband always visited there and spend some quality time over there to get some relaxation from my from our hectic schedule.

✓ My husband and I always visit there and spend some quality time to relax from our hectic schedule.

'Anne' is unclear and likely a typo. 'Me and my husband' should be 'My husband and I'. 'Visited' and 'spend' are inconsistent tenses; present tense 'visit' and 'spend' fit better with 'always'. 'My from our' is incorrect; 'our' is sufficient.

× No, I don't prefer to click the picture of the flowers.

✓ No, I don't prefer to take pictures of flowers.

'Click the picture' is informal and awkward; 'take pictures' is the correct collocation. Also, 'the picture of the flowers' should be plural 'pictures of flowers'.

× I think rather than clicking the picture, spending time is much more better than that now with the flowers because we can feel their smell, we can feel their presence over there.

✓ I think rather than taking pictures, spending time with the flowers is much better because we can smell them and feel their presence.

'Much more better' is incorrect; 'much better' is correct. 'Clicking the picture' should be 'taking pictures'. 'Feel their smell' is better expressed as 'smell them'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Actually it is a tradition in my country to give the flower as a gift to someone through their loved ones or even you're going for the party or you're going for the dinner.

✓ Actually, it is a tradition in my country to give flowers as a gift to loved ones, or even when you're going to a party or dinner.

'The flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'Through their loved ones' is unclear; 'to loved ones' is better. 'Going for the party' should be 'going to a party'.

× I remember last time when I visited my uncle home I gifted him up bunch of bookie.

✓ I remember last time when I visited my uncle's home, I gifted him a bunch of books.

'Visited my uncle home' should be 'visited my uncle's home' to show possession. 'Gifted him up bunch of bookie' is incorrect; it should be 'gifted him a bunch of books'. 'Bookie' is likely a typo for 'books'.