Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use correct grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I really like flowers because they smell good and I can use them to decorate my house during ceremonies like weddings or parties. Flowers are also great gifts for birthdays or festivals."

예시: I really like flowers because they smell good and I can use them to decorate my house during ceremonies like weddings or parties. Additionally, flowers make wonderful gifts for birthdays and festivals.

제안: Focus on correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words to explain reasons. For example, "Yes, my sister absolutely loves flowers. She enjoys gardening and spends her weekends planting and caring for various types of flowers in our backyard. For her, flowers bring a sense of peace and happiness, and she decorates her home with fresh blossoms."

예시: Yes, my sister absolutely loves flowers. She enjoys gardening and spends her weekends planting and caring for various types of flowers in our backyard. For her, flowers bring a sense of peace and happiness, and she decorates her home with fresh blossoms.

제안: Improve grammar and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, "Yes, there are many flowers where I live, especially in public parks and gardens. For example, during spring, people plant colorful flowers like tulips and roses, which brighten the area. I enjoy seeing these flowers because they add beauty and make me feel refreshed."

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live, especially in public parks and gardens. For example, during spring, people plant colorful flowers like tulips and roses, which brighten the area. I enjoy seeing these flowers because they add beauty and make me feel refreshed.

제안: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to explain your habits. For example, "Yes, I usually take photos of flowers in my daily life, but not very often. Sometimes, I use flowers as a background in my photos because they look cool, even when the flowers are not fully blossomed."

예시: Yes, I usually take photos of flowers in my daily life, but not very often. Sometimes, I use flowers as a background in my photos because they look cool, even when the flowers are not fully blossomed.

제안: Focus on correct word choice and sentence structure. Use linking words to explain reasons. For example, "Yes, in my country, many people often send sunflowers to others as gifts. Flowers are also used to express feelings and are important in ceremonies like weddings and birthday parties."

예시: Yes, in my country, many people often send sunflowers to others as gifts. Flowers are also used to express feelings and are important in ceremonies like weddings and birthday parties.

× Yes, I really like flowers so much because it is smell good.

✓ Yes, I really like flowers so much because they smell good.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect here because 'flowers' is plural, so the correct pronoun is 'they'. Also, 'smell' should be used without 'is' to agree with the plural subject.

× An I can just forward to degrade my house during the ceremony like wedding or party.

✓ And I can just look forward to decorating my house during ceremonies like weddings or parties.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'An' should be 'And'; 'forward to degrade' is incorrect, the correct phrase is 'look forward to decorating'; 'ceremony like wedding or party' should be pluralized and articles added for clarity.

× Not only we can use flower as a gift in the birthday party or any festive.

✓ Not only can we use flowers as gifts at birthday parties or any festive occasions.

The sentence structure is incorrect; 'Not only we can' should be 'Not only can we'. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' and 'gift' should be plural 'gifts' to match the context. 'Birthday party' and 'festive' need plural or proper noun forms.

× Yes, my sister is absolutely loves flower.

✓ Yes, my sister absolutely loves flowers.

The verb 'is' is unnecessary before 'absolutely loves'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context.

× She enjoyed gardening an offense, spent her weekend planting and caring for variety type of flowers in our backyard.

✓ She enjoys gardening often, spending her weekends planting and caring for a variety of flowers in our backyard.

'An offense' is incorrect; it should be 'often'. 'Spent her weekend' should be 'spending her weekends' to match the present tense. 'Variety type of flowers' should be 'a variety of flowers'.

× For her flowering a sense of peace and happiness and she even degrade her home with fresh flower. Blossom.

✓ For her, flowering gives a sense of peace and happiness, and she even decorates her home with fresh flower blossoms.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'For her flowering a sense' should be 'flowering gives a sense'. 'Degrade' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'decorate'. 'Fresh flower. Blossom.' should be 'fresh flower blossoms'.

× Yes, there are quite a lot of flower where I live, especially in public park and garden.

✓ Yes, there are quite a lot of flowers where I live, especially in public parks and gardens.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'Public park and garden' should be plural 'public parks and gardens' to match the context.

× For example, during spring many people plan many colorful flowers like tulips and roses which really brightened.

✓ For example, during spring many people plant many colorful flowers like tulips and roses which really brighten.

'Plan' should be 'plant' to indicate planting flowers. 'Brightened' is past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'brighten'.

× An I enjoy seeing that those flower because they add beauty and bring me a refreshing.

✓ And I enjoy seeing those flowers because they add beauty and bring me refreshment.

'An' should be 'And'. 'That those flower' is incorrect; it should be 'those flowers'. 'Bring me a refreshing' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'refreshment'.

× Yes, I usually take some photo with flower in my daily life, but it is not often taking photo with flower could be a background of I would have in the photo so it looks so cool when we take the flower without blossom shape.

✓ Yes, I usually take some photos with flowers in my daily life, but I do not often take photos with flowers as the background. I think it looks cool when we take photos of flowers without blossoms.

'Some photo' should be 'some photos'. 'With flower' should be 'with flowers'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs to be simplified for clarity.

× Yes, I think in my country many people offend sunflower to others because they kept flower as a gift or it can be a lab message also they use them in.

✓ Yes, I think in my country many people often send sunflowers to others because they keep flowers as gifts or they can be a love message. Also, they use them in

'Offend sunflower' is incorrect; it should be 'often send sunflowers'. 'Kept flower' should be 'keep flowers'. 'Lab message' is likely 'love message'. The sentence is incomplete and needs continuation.