Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response with clear reasons and avoid irrelevant words. Use simple and correct sentences to express your feelings about flowers.

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they are bright in colour and make me feel happy.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Try to give a clear and direct response with supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and irrelevant phrases.

예시: Yes, my mother loves flowers. She has a beautiful flower garden in our yard, which makes her very happy.

제안: Your answer has good content but needs better sentence structure and linking words. Try to organise your ideas clearly and use correct grammar to make your answer more natural and effective.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because there are lots of parks and gardens. Moreover, many people grow flowers in their yards as it makes their houses look elegant.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and linking words to improve fluency and clarity.

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers when I go outside for work. It is one of my hobbies, and I also post these photos on social media quite often.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some unclear words and minor errors. Try to speak clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, especially on special occasions like birthdays, weddings, and festivals. Sending flowers is a common way to express appreciation and congratulations.

× Yes, I love flowers because it is however they are a bright in color and also Alice nice smile.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because they are bright in color and also have a nice smell.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'it is' and 'Alice nice smile' which are unclear and incorrect pronoun and noun usage. 'They' should refer to 'flowers' (plural), and 'smile' should be 'smell' to make sense. Correct pronouns and nouns improve clarity.

× Yes, my mother has a mother. My mother. Yeah, I know. My mother is. She loves flowers. Here's a flower garden. In the yard. It's a measure, happy Father.

✓ Yes, I know my mother. She loves flowers. She has a flower garden in the yard. It makes her happy.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining related ideas into complete sentences improves coherence and clarity. Also, 'measure, happy Father' is unclear and corrected to 'makes her happy' to convey intended meaning.

× Yes, in my living place where a lot of parks and gardens are there, more over a lot of people there grown. Lot of people are the bone. Flowers in the yard because it looks like it gives elegant looks to their house.

✓ Yes, in my living place, there are a lot of parks and gardens. Moreover, many people grow flowers in their yards because it makes their houses look elegant.

The sentence has incorrect prepositions and awkward phrasing like 'grown' and 'are the bone'. Correct prepositions and verb forms ('grow' instead of 'grown') and clearer sentence structure improve understanding.

× Yes, I often take a photos in my when I go to the working outside.

✓ Yes, I often take photos when I go out for work.

The phrase 'a photos' is incorrect because 'photos' is plural and should not have the article 'a'. Also, 'in my when I go to the working outside' is awkward and corrected to 'when I go out for work' for clarity.

× It is in my routine hobby also.

✓ It is also my routine hobby.

The phrase 'in my routine hobby' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'my routine hobby' without 'in'. This correction improves grammatical accuracy and naturalness.

× And also I quite often poster my photos in social media as well as.

✓ And also, I quite often post my photos on social media as well.

'Poster' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'post'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to social media. Correct pronoun and preposition usage improves sentence correctness.

× Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others IK specially on special occasions like birthdays, weddings and festivals.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, especially on special occasions like birthdays, weddings, and festivals.

'IK' is unclear and likely a typo; it is removed. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper punctuation. 'Especially' is the correct word to indicate emphasis.

× Sending flowers is a common way to express appreciation. Hello are congratulations.

✓ Sending flowers is a common way to express appreciation and congratulations.

'Hello are congratulations' is incorrect and unclear. It is corrected to 'and congratulations' to properly complete the sentence and convey the intended meaning.