Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“the always half of fragrance”不符合英语习惯。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法正确。

예시: Yes, I love flowers because their fragrance always uplifts my mood. My favorite flower is the Osmanthus.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“who taking care”应为“who takes care”。建议注意动词时态和主谓一致，同时可以增加连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, my mother loves flowers. We have a small garden on our balcony, and she is the one who takes care of all the flowers and plants.

제안: 回答内容混乱且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，明确表达地点和原因，避免断句错误。

예시: Yes, there are many kinds of flowers and plants where I live in Vietnam because the climate is suitable for them.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“taking nice picture”应为“taking nice pictures”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达，并注意动词形式。

예시: Yes, I work at a resort hotel that has many beautiful flowers and plants. I enjoy walking around and taking nice pictures of the flowers.

제안: 回答中表达不清晰，语法错误较多，如“could ask a gesture of friendly and appreciation”不符合英语习惯。建议使用更准确的表达方式，明确说明送花的意义。

예시: Yes, in China, people often send flowers to express friendship and appreciation when they want to show gratitude to others.

× Yes, I love flowers because the always half of fragrance that can simply uplift my mood and my favorite flower is Osmanthus.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because they always have a fragrance that can simply uplift my mood, and my favorite flower is Osmanthus.

句中'the'用错，应该用复数代词'they'指代'flowers'，且'have'动词缺失，需用复数形式。

× She is the one who taking care of all the flowers and the plant.

✓ She is the one who takes care of all the flowers and the plants.

关系代词后动词缺少第三人称单数形式的变化，应为'takes'。'plant'应为复数形式'plants'，因为指多个植物。

× Yes, we have a lot of different kinds of flowers and plants in Vietnam, which is a city I am working. Now. Becauses wing man has the. Fast. Environment for the plant.

✓ Yes, we have a lot of different kinds of flowers and plants in Vietnam, which is the city where I am working now because it has a good environment for plants.

原句结构混乱，断句错误，且'Vietnam'是国家，不是城市，需改为'the city where I am working now'。'Becauses wing man has the. Fast. Environment for the plant.'语句不通，改为'because it has a good environment for plants'。

× So my hobby is to work around and taking nice picture of the flowers.

✓ So my hobby is to walk around and take nice pictures of the flowers.

'work around'应为'walk around'更符合语境；'taking'应改为动词原形'take'，因为前面是不定式结构；'picture'应为复数形式'pictures'。

× Yes, in China we often send flowers to others because sending flowers could ask a gesture of friendly and appreciation when we want to express our gratitude to someone else.

✓ Yes, in China we often send flowers to others because sending flowers is a gesture of friendliness and appreciation when we want to express our gratitude to someone else.

'could ask a gesture of friendly'用法错误，应改为'is a gesture of friendliness'，'friendly'应为名词形式'friendliness'。