Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言不流畅且有语法错误，建议练习简单句的正确表达，避免断句和无意义词汇。

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and can make me feel happy and relaxed.

제안: 回答内容不连贯，缺少逻辑和完整句子，建议练习用完整句子表达观点，并使用连接词。

예시: My mother loves flowers very much. She has some roses at home that my father gave her.

제안: 回答中存在大量语法和表达错误，建议多练习描述环境的句型，并注意句子完整性。

예시: There are many flowers along the road where I live. People also have flowers in their gardens, which makes the area very beautiful.

제안: 表达不清晰且句子断裂，建议练习用连贯句子描述习惯和活动。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of beautiful flowers. Sometimes, I take pictures with my mother and share them with my friends.

제안: 回答中有发音和拼写错误，句子结构不完整，建议练习正确表达习俗和节日活动。

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others on special occasions. For example, on Teacher's Day, we give flowers to our teachers as gifts.

× He called their single.

✓ They are called singles.

这里的主语是复数的“flowers”，所以谓语和代词也应该用复数形式。原句中使用了单数形式“their single”，不符合主谓一致。

× Flowers are very. Fantastic.

✓ Flowers are very fantastic.

“very”和形容词“fantastic”之间不应该有句号，句子应连贯表达程度副词修饰形容词。

× You can makes me.

✓ You can make me.

情态动词“can”后面应接动词原形，不能加“s”。

× You can make me happy and relax.

✓ You can make me happy and relaxed.

“make sb. + 形容词”结构中，表示状态时应使用过去分词“relaxed”而非动词原形“relax”。

× My mother was so loved.

✓ My mother loves flowers very much.

原句时态和表达不符合语境，应使用一般现在时表达习惯性动作。

× He lacks the roads.

✓ She likes the roses.

“He”指代错误，应指代“my mother”，且“lacks the roads”语义不通，应为“likes the roses”。

× And. I have some roses.

✓ And I have some roses.

句中不应有多余的句号，且“roses”为复数形式正确。

× Which is. Gave him by my father.

✓ Which were given to her by my father.

定语从句结构错误，且时态应为过去时被动语态，且代词应与“my mother”对应。

× There are lot manning floors under Rd. where I live.

✓ There are lots of flowers along the road where I live.

“There are”后应接复数名词，且“lot”应为“lots of”，表达数量。

× There are quite a few flowers in people's gardens.

✓ There are quite a few flowers in people's gardens.

该句无语法错误，复数形式正确。

× And I left you. Enjoy the flowers at home because they make the.

✓ And I like to enjoy the flowers at home because they make me happy.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达。

× Yes, I like to take photos of flowers in my daily life before I say some beautiful. Float.

✓ Yes, I like to take photos of flowers in my daily life because I see some beautiful flowers.

“before I say some beautiful float”语义不通，且“float”应为“flowers”，句子需调整使表达合理。

× I will show the floors. With my friend.

✓ I will show the flowers to my friend.

“floors”应为“flowers”，且“show”后应接宾语和间接宾语，需用介词“to”。

× Yes, we will sing. Send the Florida to some people in some special days.

✓ Yes, we will send flowers to some people on special days.

“sing”应为“send”，且“Florida”应为“flowers”，介词“on”用于表示特定的日子。

× For example, in Teachers day, we will give our teacher flowers as a gift too.

✓ For example, on Teachers' Day, we will give our teacher flowers as a gift too.

节日用介词“on”，且“Teachers day”应为“Teachers' Day”，表示专有名词。