Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer has good ideas but lacks fluency and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences without unnecessary pauses and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they brighten my day and uplift my mood. For example, when I receive flowers from a special someone, it makes me feel important and loved.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Use correct verb forms and linking words to make your response more coherent and natural.

예시: Yes, I know someone who loves flowers, and that is my mother. My siblings and I always make sure to give her flowers because they lift her mood and brighten her day.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use articles correctly and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, avoid vague expressions.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers in my neighbourhood because we live in an urban area. People often pick flowers and place them beside their houses for decoration.

제안: Your answer is understandable but fragmented and contains errors. Try to combine sentences smoothly and use appropriate vocabulary. Also, avoid short, incomplete sentences.

예시: I don't usually take photos of flowers because they are quite common in my area. However, if I see a rare flower, I make sure to take a photo and post it on social media.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Focus on forming complete, clear sentences and explaining your ideas logically with linking words.

예시: People in my country usually don't send flowers to others because many find it boring or cannot afford them. Instead, people prefer to show love through actions rather than gifts.

× Yes, I love flowers because.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because they brighten my day and uplift my mood.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'because' and lacks a complete clause explaining the reason. This is a sentence structure error. To correct it, the sentence should be completed with a subject and verb, such as 'they brighten my day and uplift my mood.'

× The brighten my day and.

✓ They brighten my day and uplift my mood.

The sentence fragment 'The brighten my day and.' is incomplete and lacks a subject and proper verb form. 'The' should be 'They' to refer to flowers, and the sentence should be completed to express the full idea. This is a sentence structure error.

× The uplift my mood, for example when I received flowers from a special someone.

✓ They uplift my mood, for example when I receive flowers from a special someone.

The fragment 'The uplift my mood' is incorrect; 'The' should be 'They' as the subject. Also, 'received' should be 'receive' to maintain present tense consistency. The sentence was incomplete and needed correction for subject and tense, which is a sentence structure and tense issue.

× Flower.

✓ Flowers.

The single word 'Flower.' is incomplete and does not form a sentence. It should be 'Flowers' if intended as a noun, but ideally integrated into a complete sentence. This is a sentence structure error.

× Yes, I know someone who love flowers and that is my mother.

✓ Yes, I know someone who loves flowers and that is my mother.

The verb 'love' does not agree with the singular subject 'someone.' It should be 'loves' to match the third person singular subject. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× My siblings and I make sure to give her flowers because.

✓ My siblings and I make sure to give her flowers because it lifts her mood and brightens her day.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'because' and lacks the reason clause. Completing the sentence with 'it lifts her mood and brightens her day' corrects the sentence structure error.

× It lifts her mood and brighten her day.

✓ It lifts her mood and brightens her day.

The verb 'brighten' should be 'brightens' to agree with the singular subject 'it.' This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× Yes, there are a lot of flowers in my neighborhood because we are living in urban area.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers in my neighborhood because we are living in an urban area.

The phrase 'urban area' requires the indefinite article 'an' because it is a singular countable noun starting with a vowel sound. Omitting the article is incorrect.

× In the urban area we just pick flowers an put in a side our house for decoration.

✓ In the urban area, we just pick flowers and put them aside our house for decoration.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'an' should be 'and'; 'in a side' should be 'aside'; and 'put' requires an object, so 'them' is added. Also, a comma after 'area' improves clarity. These are preposition and conjunction usage errors.

× I don't usually take photos because.

✓ I don't usually take photos because flowers in my area are quite common.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'because' and lacks the reason clause. Completing the sentence corrects the sentence structure error.

× But if I see a rare one, I make sure to.

✓ But if I see a rare one, I make sure to take a photo and post it on social media.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'make sure to.' It needs a verb phrase to complete the meaning. Also, 'pose it in social media' is incorrect; it should be 'post it on social media.' This is a sentence structure and word choice error.

× Take a photo and pose it in social media.

✓ Take a photo and post it on social media.

The verb 'pose' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'post.' Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to social media platforms.

× People in my country usually don't send flowers to others because we are two board.

✓ People in my country usually don't send flowers to others because we are too bored.

The phrase 'two board' is a misspelling of 'too bored.' This is a spelling and sentence structure error that affects meaning.

× Are we cannot afford to buy one?

✓ We cannot afford to buy one.

The sentence 'Are we cannot afford to buy one?' is ungrammatical. The auxiliary 'Are' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The correct sentence is 'We cannot afford to buy one.' This is a sentence structure error.

× So, people. Preferred to give. Love through action.

✓ So, people prefer to give love through actions.

The original sentences are fragmented and incorrectly capitalised. 'Preferred' should be 'prefer' to match present tense, and 'Love' should be lowercase. Also, 'action' should be plural 'actions' to be idiomatic. This is a sentence structure and tense error.