Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用存在较多错误，建议简化句子结构，注意语法正确性，并使用恰当的词汇表达。

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they bring beauty and happiness. For example, I especially like lilies. My friend has lilies in her yard, and their fragrance always cheers me up.

제안: 回答较为完整，但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，建议注意主谓一致，使用更准确的词汇，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: My father really loves flowers and often plants various kinds in our yard, such as lilacs and tulips. These flowers not only make our home look beautiful but also create a pleasant atmosphere. Because of this, everyone who visits feels happy.

제안: 表达不够清晰，存在语法和词汇错误，建议简化句子，注意时态和词汇搭配，避免冗余。

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because I have planted various kinds on my balcony. I take care of them every day to help them grow well. Flowers bring me happiness and make my home more beautiful and relaxing.

제안: 回答语法混乱，表达不连贯，建议使用简单句子，注意句子结构和词汇的正确使用，表达清晰完整的意思。

예시: Yes, I sometimes take photos of flowers and plants. I love gardening, and photographing flowers helps me appreciate their beauty. It also makes me feel calm and relaxed every day.

제안: 回答内容基本完整，但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，建议注意冠词使用，词汇搭配，并使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, in my country, many people prefer sending flowers as gifts because they symbolize love and appreciation. For example, during the Spring Festival, many people buy flowers from stores and give them to friends, relatives, and loved ones.

× Yes, I do love flowers flower book bring us a beautiful sceneries, the and the giver and give people a good mood and for example, I especially love Lily kiss.

✓ Yes, I do love flowers. Flowers bring us beautiful scenery, and they give people a good mood. For example, I especially love lilies.

原句中“flower book bring us a beautiful sceneries”存在单复数错误，flower应为复数flowers，sceneries应为不可数名词scenery。需要将句子拆分成多个完整句子，且使用正确的名词单复数形式。

× I have allylic St. in my friend of yard into always spray me. Blow them.

✓ I have lilies in my friend's yard, and they always spray me. I blow them.

原句中“in my friend of yard into always spray me”介词使用错误，应为“in my friend's yard”。另外句子结构混乱，需调整使其通顺。

× My father really loves the flowers and the often plants a variety of them in our yard such as lilacs and tulips.

✓ My father really loves flowers and often plants a variety of them in our yard, such as lilacs and tulips.

原句中“the flowers”和“the often plants”中“the”使用错误，flowers前不需要定冠词，often前不应有the。

× These flowers not only make our home looks beautiful but also create a pleasant or the most fair.

✓ These flowers not only make our home look beautiful but also create a pleasant atmosphere.

原句中“make our home looks”主谓不一致，应为“make our home look”。“a pleasant or the most fair”表达不清，改为“a pleasant atmosphere”更合适。

× Because of this, everyone who visits feels happy.

✓ Because of this, everyone who visits feels happy.

该句无明显介词错误，保持原句。

× Yes, there are quite a few flowers where I live because I have planted a variety of them on my balcony.

✓ Yes, there are quite a few flowers where I live because I have planted a variety of them on my balcony.

该句无单复数错误，保持原句。

× I watch them every day to have them grow well.

✓ I watch them every day to help them grow well.

原句中“to have them grow well”表达不自然，改为“to help them grow well”更符合英语习惯。

× Going flower bring a lot of happiness and allows me to enjoy a more beautiful and relaxing if element and home.

✓ Growing flowers brings a lot of happiness and allows me to enjoy a more beautiful and relaxing environment at home.

原句中“Going flower bring”动词形式错误，应为“Growing flowers brings”。“if element and home”表达不清，改为“environment at home”。

× Yes, I sometimes. Take a photos about flowers and the planting.

✓ Yes, I sometimes take photos of flowers and planting.

原句中“a photos”单复数错误，应为“photos”。“about flowers and the planting”介词使用不当，改为“of flowers and planting”。

× Because US planting lover I. I prefer operating in.

✓ Because I am a planting lover, I prefer gardening.

原句中“US planting lover I”语序错误且不通顺，应调整为“Because I am a planting lover”。“I prefer operating in”表达不清，改为“I prefer gardening”。

× The flowers beauty. They can make me calm down and bring me a sense of relaxing every day after.

✓ The beauty of flowers can calm me down and bring me a sense of relaxation every day.

原句中“The flowers beauty”结构错误，应为“The beauty of flowers”。“a sense of relaxing”应为“a sense of relaxation”。

× Yes, in my country many people prefer sending. Flowers as gift to others because the flowers symbolize love and appreciation.

✓ Yes, in my country many people prefer sending flowers as gifts to others because flowers symbolize love and appreciation.

原句中“sending. Flowers as gift”断句错误，且“gift”应为复数“gifts”。“the flowers”前的定冠词不必要，改为“flowers”。

× For example, in the Spring Festival, many people buy flower from stores and give them as a gift to friends and relationships and relatives.

✓ For example, during the Spring Festival, many people buy flowers from stores and give them as gifts to friends, relatives, and acquaintances.

原句中“in the Spring Festival”介词使用错误，应为“during the Spring Festival”。“buy flower”单复数错误，应为“buy flowers”。“relationships”用词不当，改为“acquaintances”。