Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear due to incorrect word usage and lacks coherence. Try to use correct vocabulary and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer natural and concise.

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they come in various shapes and structures, which makes them fascinating to look at.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Make sure to use correct sentence structure and provide specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I know many people who love flowers, including my mother, aunties, and friends. They all appreciate different kinds of flowers because they find them beautiful and amazing.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many unclear phrases. Focus on giving a clear and direct response with specific details. Use simple and correct sentences to describe the presence of flowers in your area.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. You can see them along the streets and in gardens near residential areas.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by making it more concise and clear. Use linking words to explain your reason logically and avoid unnecessary repetition.

예시: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because I don't go out often, and when I do, I mostly go to school without my phone.

제안: Your answer is good but contains minor errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct prepositions and avoid repeating words. Provide a clear list of occasions when flowers are gifted, using linking words for coherence.

예시: Yes, definitely. People usually give flowers on birthdays, graduations, weddings, anniversaries, and other special occasions.

× Yes I do because of their reniec shapes and different types of cutters and structure.

✓ Yes, I do because of their unique shapes and different types of colors and structures.

The word 'reniec' is incorrect and unclear; it seems the student meant 'unique' or a similar adjective. Also, 'cutters' is incorrect in this context; likely, the student meant 'colors'. 'Structure' should be plural to match 'types'. Correct adjectives and nouns improve clarity and accuracy.

× Yes I do, all my friends in my. I aunties and my mother, all of them loves flowers, all different kinds of flowers.

✓ Yes, I do. All my friends, my aunties, and my mother, all of them love flowers, all different kinds of flowers.

The phrase 'in my. I aunties' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'my aunties'. Also, 'loves' should be 'love' to agree with the plural subject 'all of them'. Proper pronoun and subject usage is necessary for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× all of them loves flowers, all different kinds of flowers.

✓ all of them love flowers, all different kinds of flowers.

The subject 'all of them' is plural, so the verb should be 'love' instead of 'loves'. Subject-verb agreement is essential to maintain grammatical correctness.

× Yes, they are. There are flowers everywhere in the streets and also if they are not industry is you can find many flowers, inch of many flowers and chocolate jobs near boy.

✓ Yes, there are. There are flowers everywhere in the streets, and also if you are not in the industry, you can find many flowers, including many flowers and chocolate shops near the boy.

The original sentence is confusing and contains unclear phrases like 'if they are not industry is' and 'inch of many flowers and chocolate jobs near boy'. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure and word choice for better understanding.

× No, I don't because I don't actually go out every day. If I'm going out every day, I'm just going to school, so I don't have my phone actually.

✓ No, I don't because I don't actually go out every day. When I go out, I am usually just going to school, so I don't usually have my phone with me.

The phrase 'If I'm going out every day' is incorrect in this context; 'When I go out' is more appropriate. Also, 'I don't have my phone actually' is awkward; 'I don't usually have my phone with me' is clearer. Proper modal and temporal expressions improve sentence clarity.

× Yes, definitely. We usually gift flowers to people in their birthday or in some some kind of events like L graduation or a wedding or an anniversary or something like that.

✓ Yes, definitely. We usually gift flowers to people on their birthday or at some kinds of events like graduation, a wedding, an anniversary, or something like that.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'birthday' and 'events'; the correct prepositions are 'on' for 'birthday' and 'at' for 'events'. Also, 'some some kind of events like L graduation' is corrected to 'some kinds of events like graduation'. Proper preposition use is important for grammatical accuracy.