Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid hesitations and repetitions to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use complete sentences and connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I love flowers because giving or receiving them is a romantic act that symbolizes love and kindness.

제안: Avoid generalisations and grammatical errors. Use clear and complete sentences with appropriate linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, many people love flowers, especially women. For example, giving flowers on Mother's Day is a popular and meaningful gesture.

제안: Try to organise your answer clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because people love planting them. For instance, parks are full of colourful and bright flowers that create a pleasant atmosphere.

제안: Avoid repeating phrases and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to explain your preferences clearly.

예시: I don't usually take photos of flowers themselves, but I prefer taking photos next to flowers because they make the pictures more vibrant and beautiful, as I love nature.

제안: Try to avoid repetition and use more precise vocabulary. Structure your answer with clear examples and linking words.

예시: Yes, people in my country are fond of flowers. For example, many buy and give flowers on occasions such as Mother's Day and birthdays.

× I think giving or receiving flowers is such a. Romantic act It's it's a symbol of love and kindness.

✓ I think giving or receiving flowers is such a romantic act. It's a symbol of love and kindness.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure with an unnecessary period splitting the sentence and repeated words ('It's it's'). Correcting the sentence structure and removing repetition improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Sure, I think. All women's love flowers, even Mens do because it's such as symbolized gesture to receive or give flowers for example you can give flowers in a Mother's Day is very.

✓ Sure, I think all women love flowers, even men do because it's such a symbolic gesture to receive or give flowers. For example, you can give flowers on Mother's Day; it is very meaningful.

The original sentence contains incorrect plural forms ('women's' instead of 'women', 'Mens' instead of 'men'), incorrect article usage ('such as symbolized' instead of 'such a symbolic'), and awkward sentence structure. Correcting plural forms, articles, and sentence structure improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× Yes, people in my country love planting flowers so lots of parking here.

✓ Yes, people in my country love planting flowers, so there are lots of parks here.

The word 'parking' is incorrect in this context; the correct plural noun is 'parks'. Also, the sentence lacks the verb 'there are' to indicate existence. Correcting these improves meaning and grammar.

× They they are. They are with planted flower, colorful and bright flowers are everywhere.

✓ They are planted with flowers; colorful and bright flowers are everywhere.

The original sentence has repetition ('They they are. They are') and awkward phrasing ('with planted flower'). Correcting repetition and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× You can smell the. You can smell the.

✓ You can smell the flowers.

The original sentence is incomplete and repetitive. Completing the sentence with the object 'flowers' and removing repetition makes it grammatically correct and clear.

× I don't take especially photo of flowers but instead I take for example for example, I prefer taking photo next to flowers to make the photo more vibrant and beautiful.

✓ I don't especially take photos of flowers, but instead, for example, I prefer taking photos next to flowers to make the photo more vibrant and beautiful.

The original sentence has awkward word order and repetition ('for example for example'). Correcting word order and removing repetition improves sentence flow and grammatical accuracy.

× You can give flowers in a Mother's Day is very.

✓ You can give flowers on Mother's Day; it is very meaningful.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to days; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and awkward; completing it improves clarity.

× Oh yes, people in my country are found of flowers.

✓ Oh yes, people in my country are fond of flowers.

The word 'found' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'fond'. This is a common confusion between similar-sounding words.