Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不自然。建议使用完整句子，避免断句，增加连接词，使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I really love flowers, especially roses because of their vibrant colors. I find that flowers always bring me a strong sense of energy and happiness.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并提供具体细节。

예시: Yes, my grandmother loves flowers. She is an avid gardener, and her front and backyard are always full of beautiful flowers.

제안: 语法和用词错误较多，表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并说明原因。

예시: No, unfortunately, I don't have many flowers at home because my flat is very small and there isn't enough space for them.

제안: 表达较为清晰，但有语法和词汇错误。建议注意介词和形容词的正确使用，避免重复。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers at the National Park near my home. There are many vibrant and flourishing flowers, and I really enjoy capturing their beauty.

제안: 回答中有重复和拼写错误，表达不够准确。建议避免重复，使用正确词汇，并举例说明。

예시: Yes, it is quite common for Chinese people to send flowers as gifts, especially during special occasions like graduation parties and the Spring Festival.

× Yes. I'm a person that really. Interested in flower, especially the Rose, another vibrant color. Flowers.

✓ Yes. I'm a person that is really interested in flowers, especially roses and other vibrant colored flowers.

这里的flower应该用复数形式flowers，因为表示一般的花卉。Rose也应使用复数roses，表示多种玫瑰花。

× Yes. I'm a person that really. Interested in flower, especially the Rose, another vibrant color. Flowers.

✓ Yes. I'm a person that is really interested in flowers, especially roses and other vibrant colored flowers.

句子结构不完整，'really. Interested'中间缺少动词is，导致句子断裂。需要补充完整。

× You know what the front. Doran backyard of her house full with flowers.

✓ You know, the front and backyard of her house are full of flowers.

front和backyard应使用复数形式，且表达应为'front and backyard'。

× You know what the front. Doran backyard of her house full with flowers.

✓ You know, the front and backyard of her house are full of flowers.

'full with'用法错误，正确搭配是'full of'。

× I can't foster a lot of flowers in my flat as becaused I sat is really small that can't have lots of spare space for this kind of beautiful flowers.

✓ I can't foster a lot of flowers in my flat because it is really small and doesn't have much spare space for this kind of beautiful flowers.

句中'because'拼写错误，且句子结构混乱，需调整使句子通顺。

× I can't foster a lot of flowers in my flat as becaused I sat is really small that can't have lots of spare space for this kind of beautiful flowers.

✓ I can't foster a lot of flowers in my flat because it is really small and doesn't have much spare space for this kind of beautiful flowers.

'this kind of beautiful flowers'中flowers应为复数，'this kind of'后接复数名词。

× Yes, in my daily life I often take photos of flowers at the National Park, which is really neared my home.

✓ Yes, in my daily life I often take photos of flowers at the National Park, which is really near my home.

'neared'是过去式，表示接近的正确形容词是'near'。

× In this park there are lots of vibrant and flush flourish flowers and I can't get enough of taking photos of them.

✓ In this park there are lots of vibrant and flourishing flowers and I can't get enough of taking photos of them.

'flush flourish'用法错误，应为'flourishing'表示繁茂的。

× Yes. I think it is a quite common thing for Chinese people to send flowers as a gift, especially during the special special occasions such as the graduation party and the Spring Festival.

✓ Yes. I think it is quite common for Chinese people to send flowers as gifts, especially during special occasions such as graduation parties and the Spring Festival.

'a quite common thing'表达不自然，改为'quite common'。'a gift'改为复数'gifts'更符合语境。

× During this time, people often send the flowers as Avast.

✓ During this time, people often send flowers as a gift.

'Avast'拼写错误，应为'gift'，且不需要定冠词'the'。