Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by avoiding unnecessary words like 'and such as'. Also, provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details, and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I love flowers, especially sunflowers and roses. I enjoy growing them on my balcony because they brighten up the space and make me feel happy.

제안: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, be specific and avoid repetition. For example, mention your mother's hobbies and why she loves flowers in a coherent way.

예시: Yes, my mother loves flowers because she enjoys drawing different plants. She spends a lot of time in the garden, which is full of beautiful flowers like sunflowers and marigolds.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct grammar, and provide specific reasons or examples. Keep your answer concise and relevant to the question.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because people enjoy planting them. Flowers help create a calm atmosphere and improve the local climate.

제안: Improve clarity by using correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid unclear phrases like 'I'm all for Talik version' and 'photos of large'. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples.

예시: Yes, I enjoy photography and often take pictures of flowers. For example, many gardens in my neighborhood are full of colorful flowers, and capturing their beauty helps me feel calm and relaxed.

제안: Make your answer more coherent by organizing your ideas clearly and using correct grammar. Explain why people send flowers and give specific occasions as examples. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers as gifts on special occasions like birthdays and anniversaries. Flowers are popular because of their beautiful colors and the positive feelings they convey.

× Yes, I love different types of flowers and such as sunflower, rose.

✓ Yes, I love different types of flowers such as sunflowers and roses.

The nouns 'sunflower' and 'rose' should be pluralized to 'sunflowers' and 'roses' because you are referring to types of flowers in general, which are countable and plural in this context.

× I like to grow flowers in my balconies.

✓ I like to grow flowers on my balconies.

The plural noun 'balconies' is correct, but the preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'on' is the correct preposition to use with balconies.

× Yes, my mother loves the different types of flowers because my mother's favorite hobbies drawing different types of plant and also my mom spends a lot of time in the garden because it's a full of beautiful flowers such as sunflower, Marigold your lips and so on.

✓ Yes, my mother loves different types of flowers because her favorite hobby is drawing different types of plants, and she also spends a lot of time in the garden because it is full of beautiful flowers such as sunflowers, marigolds, tulips, and so on.

The sentence had incorrect conjunction use and missing verbs. 'Because' clauses need proper verb phrases. Also, 'hobbies' should be singular 'hobby' to match 'favorite', and 'plant' should be plural 'plants'. The phrase 'it's a full of' is incorrect; it should be 'it is full of'. The flower names should be plural and correctly spelled.

× In my home country and in my country, there are a lot of flowers in my region because everybody likes to grow different type of flowers in there different types of regions because it's provides a calm and climate change a lot of with their flowers and it's helps to make a diff and it helps to make me in a feet and it's a very easy to.

✓ In my home country, there are a lot of flowers in my region because everybody likes to grow different types of flowers in their different regions. It provides a calm climate and changes a lot with their flowers. It helps to make a difference and helps me feel at ease. It is very easy to do.

Multiple singular/plural errors: 'different type' should be 'different types', 'there' should be 'their'. 'It's provides' is incorrect; 'it provides' is correct. The sentence was fragmented and unclear; it was restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I like photographie because I'm all for Talik version.

✓ Yes, I like photography because I'm all for taking pictures.

'Photographie' is a misspelling of 'photography'. 'I'm all for Talik version' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'I'm all for taking pictures' to make sense in context.

× I like to capture photos of large because it helps me to make a It helps to make a create a calm and relaxing atmosphere.

✓ I like to capture photos of flowers because it helps me to create a calm and relaxing atmosphere.

'Photos of large' is incorrect; likely meant 'photos of flowers'. The sentence was fragmented and repeated; corrected for clarity and grammar.

× For example, in my neighborhood, many gardens are full of with flowers and I usually capture a lot of pictures in.

✓ For example, in my neighborhood, many gardens are full of flowers and I usually capture a lot of pictures there.

The phrase 'full of with flowers' is incorrect; 'full of flowers' is correct. The sentence ending 'capture a lot of pictures in' is incomplete; 'there' is added to complete the thought.

× That's an interesting question for me because everybody likes to give gifts as a flower from the different types of occasions such as birthdays, anniversary's and so on, because it helps to give their gifts to not only their beautiful colors but also other vibrant for example.

✓ That's an interesting question for me because everybody likes to give flowers as gifts on different occasions such as birthdays, anniversaries, and so on, because flowers have not only beautiful colors but also other vibrant qualities, for example.

'Gifts as a flower' is incorrect; 'flowers as gifts' is correct. 'Anniversary's' is a possessive form; the plural 'anniversaries' is correct. The sentence was awkward and incomplete; rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.