Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they symbolize love. For example, on Mother's Day, we give flowers to our mothers as a sign of appreciation.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议使用简单句子直接回答问题，并提供具体细节。

예시: Yes, my friend loves flowers very much. She often asks me to give her beautiful flowers because she enjoys decorating her room with them.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议使用连贯的句子并补充具体原因。

예시: No, there are not many flowers in my city because it is located in northern China where the winters are very cold, so plants cannot grow well.

제안: 回答表达混乱且有语法错误，建议简洁明了地说明拍照原因并使用正确的词汇。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I like to share their beauty on WeChat. My friends say these photos make them feel happy.

제안: 回答不连贯且语法错误严重，建议直接回答并举例说明送花的场合。

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers during festivals. For example, on Mother's Day, many people buy flowers to give to their mothers.

× Yes, I love it very much because flowers that is symbolizes kind of love.

✓ Yes, I love them very much because flowers symbolize a kind of love.

这里flowers是复数，应该用复数代词them，且谓语动词应与复数主语flowers一致，使用symbolize而不是symbolizes。

× Yes, one of my friend loves flower bird much.

✓ Yes, one of my friends loves flowers very much.

one of后面应接复数名词friends，flower应为复数flowers，bird是多余的词，应删除。

× You're only if I got some beautiful flower.

✓ You are only if I get some beautiful flowers.

flower应为复数flowers，且句子结构不完整，可能意图表达条件句，需调整为正确的时态和结构。

× She always asked me to give her some flowers and make it more. Beautiful.

✓ She always asks me to give her some flowers and make them more beautiful.

谓语动词应为现在时asks，代词it应为复数them，形容词beautiful前不应有句号。

× No, there's not too many flowers in my city because I live in the north area of China.

✓ No, there are not too many flowers in my city because I live in the northern area of China.

flowers是复数，there be结构中应使用are而非is。

× In the winter especially the weather so cold soon, not too much plants.

✓ In the winter, especially, the weather is so cold, so there are not too many plants.

缺少动词is，表达因果关系应使用so，plants应为复数，句子需调整使其通顺。

× Yes I like to take photos of flowers in my daily life especially I can post ER in my we chat and that's the symbol of hapiness.

✓ Yes, I like to take photos of flowers in my daily life, especially because I can post them on my WeChat, and that's a symbol of happiness.

ER应为them，WeChat首字母大写，happiness拼写错误，且句子需加连词使其完整。

× And for allowed to my 4 allowed to my friends.

✓ And I allow my friends to see them.

句子结构混乱，allowed用法错误，应使用allow，数字4不明确，改为my friends更自然。

× They will say the flowers make them happy.

✓ They say the flowers make them happy.

will表示将来时，语境中一般现在时更合适。

× Yes, Oh, you really on different festival people say show the flowers to different people.

✓ Yes, oh, on different festivals people show flowers to different people.

on different festival应为on different festivals，say show用法错误，应删除say。

× For example in on Mother's Day when you really buy some Commission team our mothers.

✓ For example, on Mother's Day, people really buy some flowers for our mothers.

in on重复，应删除in，Commission team无意义，应改为flowers，句子结构需调整。