Geography— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然流畅，语法和表达存在错误，且内容重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，使用更准确的词汇表达观点。

예시: I don't like geography very much because I find it difficult to remember maps and the names of mountains around the world.

제안: 回答内容较为简单，缺少连贯的连接词，表达不够具体。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并提供更具体的例子。

예시: Yes, I believe geography is very useful, especially for students studying international relations, because it helps them understand different regions, mountains, and seas around the world.

제안: 语法错误较多，表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议加强语法练习，使用完整句子表达经历和感受。

예시: Yes, I started learning geography when I was 14 years old in middle school. However, I was not very good at it because I found it hard to remember the information.

제안: 表达重复且语法错误严重，内容不连贯。建议简化表达，明确说明原因，并避免重复。

예시: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I don't have enough knowledge and I lack patience to teach.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达错误，句子较长且不够连贯。建议使用更简洁的句子，并注意语法准确性。

예시: Yes, I definitely want to learn more about the geography of other countries because I am studying international relations, and knowing where countries and mountains are is very important.

× Actually, I do not like geography. Uhm, especially when I was young about a. 30 years out, that was my first time to in touch with the geography subject.

✓ Actually, I do not like geography. Uhm, especially when I was young, about 30 years ago, that was my first time to get in touch with the geography subject.

这里“30 years out”应为“30 years ago”，表示过去的时间点，使用过去式时间状语。

× that was my first time to in touch with the geography subject.

✓ that was my first time to get in touch with the geography subject.

短语应为“get in touch with”，表示“接触”，缺少动词“get”。

× I think it is hard for me to remember like the maps and mountains of the all over the world and also.

✓ I think it is hard for me to remember the maps and mountains all over the world as well.

“the all over the world”中“the”使用错误，应去掉；“like”在此处多余，应删除。

× especially for the students like who are studying international things.

✓ especially for students who are studying international things.

“the students like who”结构不正确，应去掉“the”和“like”，直接用“students who”。

× I think it is important for them to remember like. The word regions or mountains, seas all over the world.

✓ I think it is important for them to remember the world regions, mountains, and seas all over the world.

“word regions”应为“world regions”；“like”在此处多余，应删除。

× Yes, I started learned geography since I was 14 years out.

✓ Yes, I started learning geography when I was 14 years old.

“started learned”错误，应为“started learning”；“since I was 14 years out”应为“when I was 14 years old”。

× Uh, I was. Learned geography in my middle school.

✓ Uh, I learned geography in my middle school.

“I was learned”结构错误，应直接用过去式“learned”。

× And actually my greatest so bad at that time.

✓ And actually my grades were so bad at that time.

“greatest”用错，应为“grades”；缺少动词“were”。

× On the subject of geography, I think it is hard hard for me to remember the things and then don't like to.

✓ On the subject of geography, I think it is hard for me to remember the things, and I don't like it.

“and then don't like to”结构不完整，应改为“I don't like it”。

× No, I do not have enough enough knowledge on geography and also actually met geography is so bad.

✓ No, I do not have enough knowledge of geography, and actually my geography is so bad.

“enough enough”重复，应去掉一个；“met geography”应为“my geography”；“knowledge on”应改为“knowledge of”。

× Ann and I also I think it is hard for me to be a teacher in the future because I do not have enough patience.

✓ And I also think it is hard for me to be a teacher in the future because I do not have enough patience.

“Ann”应为“and”；句子中多余“I”，应删除。

× Yes, I absolutely think I will, because now I'm measuring the international relations.

✓ Yes, I absolutely think I will, because now I'm studying international relations.

“measuring”用错，应为“studying”，表示正在学习。

× And I think it is important for like for me to learn the things from all over the world, including the geographies, like where the countries are and which mountains are there in some kinds of countries.

✓ And I think it is important for me to learn things from all over the world, including geography, like where the countries are and which mountains are in some kinds of countries.

“for like for me”多余，应删去“like”；“the geographies”应为“geography”。