Geography— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more coherent and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'when I was at my school' at the end, you can say 'although I found it difficult, I understood its importance during my school days.'

예시: Actually, I don't really like geography because I find it difficult to remember all the names of places. However, I understand that it is very important to learn geography, especially from my experience at school.

제안: Improve sentence structure and avoid sentence fragments. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details. For example, explain how geography helps understand cultures and countries.

예시: Yes, I definitely believe that geography is useful because it helps us understand the world better. For instance, it teaches us about different countries and their cultures, which is very important.

제안: Make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your experience clearly.

예시: Yes, I learned geography at school as it was one of our subjects. I used to study about different places and their features, which I found interesting.

제안: Avoid incomplete sentences and improve grammar. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly and provide a complete thought.

예시: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I find the subject difficult. Moreover, I don't think I can explain it well to students. Instead, I prefer to pursue a career in business.

제안: Complete your sentences and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Provide specific reasons why you want to learn more about other countries' geography.

예시: Oh yes, I would love to learn more about the geography of other countries if I get some free time. Since I work in a company where I often interact with people from different countries, knowing their geography helps me understand them better.

× Actually, I don't really like geography becauses I find it very difficult to remember all the names of places.

✓ Actually, I don't really like geography because I find it very difficult to remember all the names of places.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'because'. This is a spelling error affecting conjunction use, so it should be corrected to 'because' to properly connect the clauses.

× But I also think that it is very important for us to know about geography when I was at my school.

✓ But I also think that it was very important for us to know about geography when I was at my school.

The phrase 'it is very important' conflicts with the past time reference 'when I was at my school'. The verb should be in past tense 'was' to match the time frame.

× Yes, I definitely believe that geography is useful. For us.

✓ Yes, I definitely believe that geography is useful for us.

The sentence 'For us.' is a fragment and does not stand alone. It should be combined with the previous sentence to form a complete thought.

× And know about different country and their culture we.

✓ And know about different countries and their cultures.

The word 'country' should be plural 'countries' to agree with 'different', and 'culture' should be plural 'cultures' to match 'countries'. Also, the phrase 'we' at the end is misplaced and should be removed.

× Yes, when I was at my school that time we have a subject called geography and we have to read the subject that time.

✓ Yes, when I was at my school, we had a subject called geography and we had to study it then.

The verbs 'have' and 'have to' should be in past tense 'had' and 'had to' to match the past time reference 'when I was at my school'.

× I remember I used to read about geography and the places and.

✓ I remember I used to read about geography and the places.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' which is incomplete. Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I find it very difficult.

✓ No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I find it very difficult.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× And I believe that I am not able to understand the students about geography A properly.

✓ And I believe that I am not able to explain geography to the students properly.

The phrase 'understand the students about geography A' is incorrect. The speaker likely means they cannot explain or teach geography properly to students. Also, 'geography A' is unclear and likely a typo.

× I prefer business rather than.

✓ I prefer business instead.

The phrase 'rather than' is incomplete without a second element. 'I prefer business instead.' is a complete sentence.

× Oh yes, I would love to learn more about the geography of other countries if I get some free time since I work in a company where I often interact with people from different countries knowing more about their geography, knowing.

✓ Oh yes, I would love to learn more about the geography of other countries if I get some free time since I work in a company where I often interact with people from different countries, so I can know more about their geography.

The sentence is run-on and ends abruptly with 'knowing'. It should be restructured to connect ideas properly using 'so I can know' to express purpose.