Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence stating the meaning, then add one or two brief supporting details (who chose it and why). Avoid repetition and fix sentence fragments and pronoun errors.

예시: Yes. My name means "peace" and "calm." My grandfather chose it because he hoped I would have a peaceful life, and he is very close to me.

제안: Answer directly with a clear plan and give a specific reason. Use linking words to connect idea and avoid hesitations like "uh." Correct grammar (future tense and nouns).

예시: I would choose meaningful names for my children. For example, I might name a daughter Rose because the flower symbolizes peace and beauty, and I want the name to reflect positive qualities.

제안: Give a direct yes/no answer first, then briefly explain. Remove filler words and clarify why the name is unique. Use one or two sentences only.

예시: No, nobody in my family has the same name. My name is unique because my grandfather invented it for me, so it isn't shared by other relatives.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence describing a specific difference, then give one or two concrete examples and a linking word. Avoid vague phrases and complete your sentences.

예시: Yes. Nowadays, parents often choose fashionable or Western-influenced names, while in the past names tended to be more traditional and based on cultural values. For example, older generations favored names meaning virtue or longevity, but today short trendy names are common.

제안: Answer clearly about popularity and give specific examples of popular names or meanings. Avoid unclear phrases and use simple, correct vocabulary and grammar.

예시: Yes. Names meaning "peace" and "harmony" are quite popular in China. For instance, characters like "Ping" (peace) or names that include "An" (safety/peace) are commonly used.

× He's very He's my best friend in my.

✓ He was my grandfather; he was like a best friend to me.

Original contains fragmented and repeated phrases and an incorrect time reference 'in my' which is incomplete. The examiner asked about the meaning of the name in present context, but the student attempts to refer to the grandfather who gave the name (past). Use a clear past tense clause 'He was my grandfather' and a metaphorical clause 'he was like a best friend to me.' Suggestion: keep sentences complete and avoid repeating words; ensure time reference matches the intended meaning.

× For the next generation, I choose the meaningful of names.

✓ For the next generation, I will choose meaningful names.

Uses present simple 'choose' incorrectly for a future intention; also incorrect phrase 'the meaningful of names.' Use future 'will choose' (or 'would choose') and plural noun 'names' with adjective 'meaningful' placed before the noun. Suggestion: use 'meaningful names' and appropriate future tense for intentions.

× I can name the uh. Rose and also so many other because it's a symbol of peace and calm and also peaceful.

✓ I might name a rose or many other names because it is a symbol of peace and calm.

Sentence is fragmented and uses 'Rose' incorrectly as a proper noun; 'peaceful' is redundant after 'peace and calm.' Replace with 'a rose' (indefinite article) and use modal 'might' for possibility. Remove redundant adjective. Suggestion: keep one clear clause and use articles correctly.

× Uh, actually not in my family there are no names. Same as me because uh, my name is exceptional because my grandfather gave me my name.

✓ Actually, no one in my family has the same name as me because my name is unique; my grandfather gave it to me.

Original has word order problems and redundant clauses. 'There are no names same as me' is ungrammatical. Use 'no one in my family has the same name as me' and avoid repeating 'because' twice. Suggestion: use natural subject-verb structure and combine reasons into one concise clause.

× Plenty of differences can be mentioned. Chinese name their children now and. Past because they use some traditional and fashionable names, which is really unique for our.

✓ There are many differences: Chinese people name their children differently now compared to the past, using both traditional and fashionable names, which makes naming practices unique in our culture.

Original contains sentence fragments, wrong word order 'Chinese name their children now and. Past', and awkward phrase 'unique for our.' Use 'There are many differences' and 'now compared to the past' to contrast time, and 'in our culture' to complete the idea. Suggestion: avoid fragments and use comparative phrases for time-based contrasts.

× Essence of diversity can be seen when I answer this question. To be specific, rules check and also peace is highly popular than others in China I would say.

✓ A great diversity of names can be seen. To be specific, names meaning 'good fortune' and 'peace' are more popular than others in China, I would say.

Original 'rules check' is unclear and likely incorrect word choice; 'peace is highly popular than others' misuses comparative structure. Use clear nouns 'names meaning' and correct comparative 'more popular than others.' Also combine sentences for clarity. Suggestion: choose precise vocabulary and use correct comparative forms.