Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more fluent. Start with a concise topic sentence stating the meaning, then give one or two specific supporting details. Reduce hesitations (umm) and avoid repetition. Use linking words like “and” or “which” to connect ideas.

예시: My name is Honey Nazihah. Honey means sweetness and Nazihah means honest or pure, and my father chose it because he liked those qualities.

제안: Organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence about your naming preference, then explain the reason with a specific detail. Avoid unclear phrases and hesitations. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to show reason.

예시: I would include a family name in my children’s names. For example, I would pass down my father’s name as a middle name because family names keep traditions and strengthen family bonds.

제안: Make your response direct and factual. Say who shares the name and give a clear brief explanation. Remove irrelevant or confusing details and hesitations.

예시: Yes. My younger sister also has the name Honey because our parents liked the name and gave it to more than one child.

제안: If you are unsure, say so briefly and then give a general, relevant idea. Provide one specific difference as an example and use linking words like “but” or “however.”

예시: I'm not an expert because I am Malaysian, but I think Chinese names have changed: in the past families often used characters with traditional meanings, while now parents sometimes choose modern-sounding names or foreign-inspired names.

제안: Again, acknowledge your limitation briefly, then offer a reasonable general answer or an example of popular name types. Use clear structure: topic sentence then one supporting detail.

예시: I don't know specific popular Chinese names because I live in Malaysia, but I believe common names often include characters meaning ‘beautiful’, ‘strong’ or ‘peace’, such as Mei (beautiful) or Wei (great).

× Yes, my name is Honey and umm, Honey.

✓ Yes, my name is Honey.

The repeated word 'Honey' is unnecessary and awkward. Use a single clear statement. Remove the duplicate to make the sentence concise and natural.

× It's for like a shining and Nazihah is for sweet.

✓ 'Honey' means shining, and 'Nazihah' means sweet.

The original mixes colloquial filler 'like' and incorrect structure. Use a clear subject-verb structure: subject (name) + verb (means) + complement (meaning). Avoid filler words and use parallel structure for two meanings.

× My dad gave me that name.

✓ My dad gave me that name.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. It is a simple past statement describing who gave the name.

× Actually my name is Juan Hani Nazia.

✓ Actually, my name is Juan Hani Nazia.

Add a comma after 'Actually' for natural pause. The sentence is otherwise correct.

× So I got I have one in my front of my names umm it's from my father's one so Wan 1.

✓ I have one of my father's names at the front of my name; it's 'Wan'.

The original is confused and ungrammatical. Use a clear subject-verb structure and proper possession: 'one of my father's names' and 'at the front of my name'. Replace vague 'Wan 1' with 'Wan' and separate clauses with a semicolon or conjunction.

× So I want my child.

✓ So I want my child to have it too.

Original fragment 'So I want my child.' is incomplete. Add an infinitive phrase 'to have it too' to show what you want for your child.

× My generation of course have one also in their names.

✓ My next generation, of course, will also have it in their names.

Tense and agreement issues: 'my generation' with 'have' is incorrect. Use 'next generation' and future 'will also have' to match intended meaning. 'It' refers to the name element.

× So I will stay with one in my.

✓ So I will keep that name element in mine.

Original is ungrammatical and missing object. Use 'keep that name element' and 'in mine' or 'in my name' for clarity and correct object.

× Yes exactly umm my siblings have like a parent name like 1 honey like we have a parrot.

✓ Yes, exactly. My siblings have a family name like 'Honey'; we even have a parrot named Honey.

Original is very unclear and has agreement and vocabulary errors. Clarify 'a parent name' to 'a family name' and correct structure. If intending to say a parrot named Honey, make that explicit.

× My sister also have umm she here her name she umm her name also one honey like as me.

✓ My sister also has that name; her name is Honey, like mine.

Use 'has' for third person singular. Remove filler words and reorder for clarity: subject + verb + object. 'Like as me' is ungrammatical; use 'like mine'.

× About this, I'm really not sure about Chinese name because I am Malaysian but I think they have a difference how the pronouns and the meaning also.

✓ I'm really not sure about Chinese names because I am Malaysian, but I think there are differences in pronunciation and meaning.

Use plural 'names' and 'there are differences' for existence. 'Pronouns' is incorrect word here; 'pronunciation' fits better. Reorder clauses and use commas for clarity.

× I'm so sorry about names in China.

✓ I'm not familiar with Chinese names.

'I'm so sorry about names in China' is awkward. Use 'not familiar with' to express lack of knowledge. Maintain present tense.

× I'm really not expert that because I'm staying in Malaysia so I really prefer Malaysian name.

✓ I'm really not an expert on that because I live in Malaysia, so I prefer Malaysian names.

Add article 'an' before 'expert', use 'on that' for the topic, use 'live' instead of 'staying' for general residence, and pluralize 'names' to match meaning.