Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be slightly more natural and concise, start with a clear topic sentence and add one specific detail or personal feeling. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes. My name means “new universe”: the first character means “new” and the second means “universe,” so together they suggest a fresh start. I like it because it feels optimistic and reminds me to be open to new opportunities.

제안: Clarify and finish your ideas, use a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., “hardworking” → “be hardworking”), and avoid fragments. Add a brief reason or example using linking words.

예시: I would choose a Chinese name that symbolizes diligence and energy because I want my children to grow up full of vitality and be hardworking. For example, I might pick a character that literally means “diligent” to remind them of the value of effort.

제안: This answer is clear and concise. To improve, add a brief supporting detail or personal comment using a linking word to sound more natural.

예시: No, none of my family members have the same name. Although we share the same surname, my given name is unique, which I think helps me stand out.

제안: Be more specific and use clearer linking words. Correct minor grammar (e.g., “parents' name choices” and give concrete examples of differences or similarities). Limit to 2–4 sentences.

예시: I think naming trends haven’t changed much: parents still favor traditional characters that carry positive meanings. For instance, characters meaning loyalty or prosperity remain popular because families value cultural significance.

제안: Good response. To reach a higher score, add one specific recent example or a brief reason using linking words to deepen the answer.

예시: Yes. Names that express positive virtues are common; for example, characters meaning “peace” or “wisdom” are popular because many parents hope their children will live harmoniously and succeed academically.

× I would choose a Chinese name that symbolizes diligence and energy because I want my children to grow up full of vitality and hardworking.

✓ I would choose a Chinese name that symbolizes diligence and energy because I want my children to grow up full of vitality and hardworking habits.

The original sentence uses the adjective 'hardworking' where a noun or noun phrase is needed after 'grow up full of vitality and'. Use a noun phrase like 'hardworking habits' or rephrase to 'and be hardworking'. Suggestion: change to 'and be hardworking' or 'and develop hardworking habits' to be grammatically correct. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× I would also pick a name represents my.

✓ I would also pick a name that represents me.

The clause 'a name represents my' is ungrammatical: it lacks the relative pronoun 'that' and uses the possessive pronoun 'my' incorrectly. Use 'that represents me' or 'which represents me'. Also ensure 'me' is the correct object form. Suggestion: 'I would also pick a name that represents me.' Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I think parents name choices are not very different from the past.

✓ I think parents' name choices are not very different from the past.

Possession is required: 'parents name choices' should be 'parents' name choices' to show that the choices belong to parents. Alternatively use 'parents' naming choices' or 'parents' choices of names'. Ensure the apostrophe to indicate plural possessive. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Traditional meaningful characters such as zhong or yoong are still popular because families value cultural significance and positive virtues in a name.

✓ Traditional meaningful characters such as Zhong or Yoong are still popular because families value cultural significance and positive virtues in a name.

Proper nouns (names/characters) should be capitalized: 'Zhong' and 'Yoong'. This is a pronoun/naming convention issue. Also ensure consistent capitalization for clarity. Suggestion: capitalize character names. Grammar problem type ID: 12