Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Use correct verb forms and avoid repeating obvious information. Try to make your answer more natural and concise by directly stating the meaning and its significance.

예시: Yes, my name means 'brave woman'. My parents chose it to inspire me to be courageous throughout my life.

제안: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct sentence structures for clarity. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases like 'by the conversation between me and my husband'.

예시: My husband and I would discuss and choose meaningful names for our children, hoping they grow up to embody those qualities.

제안: There are grammatical mistakes and some awkward phrasing. Use correct subject-verb agreement and avoid repeating negatives unnecessarily. Also, clarify the relationship between your sister and aunt's names more smoothly.

예시: No one in my family shares my name. However, my sister and aunt have the same name.

제안: Your answer lacks specific details and contains grammatical errors. Try to provide clearer examples and use correct verb forms. Avoid vague phrases like 'I would like to say'. Instead, directly state the changes you have noticed.

예시: Although I'm not an expert on Chinese naming traditions, in my family, names have become more modern and less traditional over the years.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Use correct prepositions and sentence structures. Also, explain why popular names cause confusion to add more content and clarity.

예시: I'm not very familiar with naming traditions across China, but I have noticed that some names are very popular, which sometimes causes confusion when many people share the same name.

× Yes, my name do have a special meaning, which is a brave woman.

✓ Yes, my name does have a special meaning, which is a brave woman.

The subject 'my name' is singular, so the verb should be 'does' instead of 'do' to agree in number. Use 'does' for third person singular subjects.

× No, no one in my family have the same name as me.

✓ No, no one in my family has the same name as me.

The subject 'no one' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× But yes, my sister's name and my aunt's name is same.

✓ But yes, my sister's name and my aunt's name are the same.

The compound subject 'my sister's name and my aunt's name' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'same' should be preceded by 'the' to form 'the same'.

× Well, I'm not quite familiar of the tradition across the China, but I have noticed that certain names are quite popular in our culture, so many people name them and it brings quite confusion.

✓ Well, I'm not quite familiar with the tradition across China, but I have noticed that certain names are quite popular in our culture, so many people use them and it brings quite a bit of confusion.

The correct preposition after 'familiar' is 'with', not 'of'. Also, 'across the China' should be 'across China' as 'China' is a proper noun and does not need 'the'. Additionally, 'name them' is incorrect; it should be 'use them'. 'Quite confusion' is ungrammatical; it should be 'quite a bit of confusion' or 'quite confusing'.