Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够完整且表达不清晰，缺少明确的主题句和具体细节。建议回答时先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持，避免语无伦次。

예시: Yes, my name has a special meaning. My parents chose it because it symbolizes hope and happiness, which they wished for me throughout my life.

제안: 回答中有较多语气词，影响流畅性。建议减少填充词，使用连词使句子更连贯，并具体说明如何选择名字。

예시: I would choose names based on the child's gender and also consult dictionaries or novels to find meaningful and unique names.

제안: 回答较为口语化且句子结构不够准确。建议使用更准确的语法表达，并简洁明了地回答问题。

예시: No one in my family has the same name as me. However, since China has a large population, there might be others with my name.

제안: 回答中有重复和语气词，表达不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子结构，明确对比过去和现在的命名方式。

예시: From my observation, older generations chose names more randomly, while young parents nowadays pay more attention and carefully select meaningful names.

제안: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺少具体例子和清晰的结构。建议直接回答问题并举例说明流行名字。

예시: Yes, some names are very popular in China. For example, names like Wei and Li are common and many boys share these names.

× Uh, to be honest, I ask the same question to my mom but my mom mentioned that she only watched TV series and gained the insight from it.

✓ Uh, to be honest, I asked the same question to my mom but my mom mentioned that she only watched TV series and gained the insight from it.

这里的动作发生在过去，应该使用过去时态。"ask"应改为"asked"，表示过去问过妈妈这个问题。

× So I think maybe it has special meaning but I.

✓ So I think maybe it has special meaning, but I am not sure.

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分，导致表达不清楚。需要补充完整句子，使其语义完整。

× Uh, well, firstly I would like to choose the name according their gender and besides uh, uh, I need to refer to the dictionary or uh, other novels to gain some insights from it.

✓ Uh, well, firstly I would like to choose the name according to their gender and besides uh, uh, I need to refer to the dictionary or uh, other novels to gain some insights from it.

短语"according their gender"缺少介词"to"，正确用法是"according to"，表示"根据"。

× As far as I know, I didn't meet the same name as mine, but I can't promise there are no people in China who has the same name with me because there are so many people all around the world.

✓ As far as I know, I haven't met anyone with the same name as mine, but I can't promise there are no people in China who have the same name as me because there are so many people all around the world.

"didn't meet"应改为现在完成时"haven't met"，表示到目前为止没有遇到过。"has"应改为"have"，因为主语是复数"people"。"with the same name with me"应改为"with the same name as me"，介词搭配错误。

× As far as I know, I didn't meet the same name as mine, but I can't promise there are no people in China who has the same name with me because there are so many people all around the world.

✓ As far as I know, I haven't met anyone with the same name as mine, but I can't promise there are no people in China who have the same name as me because there are so many people all around the world.

"same name with me"应改为"same name as me"，这是固定搭配，表示"和我同名"。

× Uh, from my own observation, I found the, the older generation, uh, when they choose the name, maybe more randomly, umm, but for the young generation, uh, or the young parents, they take care of the names and choose it.

✓ Uh, from my own observation, I found that the older generation, when they chose the name, maybe did so more randomly, but for the young generation, or the young parents, they take care of the names and choose them carefully.

"choose"应改为过去式"chose"，因为描述的是过去的行为。"choose it"应改为"choose them"，因为"names"是复数。

× Umm, from my own understanding, uh, I think several names may be very popular because it's very common in our daily life. Uh, maybe, uh, 100 people, uh, have uh, three, uh, goal boys have the same.

✓ Umm, from my own understanding, uh, I think several names may be very popular because they are very common in our daily life. Uh, maybe, uh, 100 boys have the same name.

"it's very common"中的"it"指代不明，应改为复数"they"指代"names"。"three, uh, goal boys"表达不清，应简化为"100 boys"。句子结构混乱，需要简化表达。