Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer wa natural dewa arimasen. Kotoba no tsukaikata ga fumei de, bunshou ga chotto midarete imasu. Motto seikaku ni, rikai shi yasui you ni kotaeru koto ga hitsuyou desu. Tatoeba, 'My name is derived from a great saint in ancient India, and it symbolizes peace and harmony.' to iu fuu ni shite kudasai.

예시: My name is derived from a great saint who lived in ancient India, and it symbolizes peace and harmony.

제안: Kotae ga fumei de, bunshou no rikai ga muzukashii desu. Motto seikaku ni, rikai shi yasui you ni kotaeru hitsuyou ga arimasu. Mata, fukusuu no bunshou wa hitsuyou nai node, 5 bunshou ijou ni shinai you ni shite kudasai.

예시: I would choose names that sound pleasant and have meaningful or religious significance, such as names of important figures in my culture.

제안: Kotae ga fumei de, bunshou no tsuzuki ga midarete imasu. Motto seikaku ni, rikai shi yasui you ni kotaeru hitsuyou ga arimasu. Tatoeba, 'No one in my family has the same name as me. In my life, I have met only two people with the same name.' to iu fuu ni shite kudasai.

예시: No one in my family has the same name as me. In my life, I have met only two people who share my name.

제안: Kotae ga fumei de, bunshou no tsuzuki ga midarete imasu. Motto seikaku ni, rikai shi yasui you ni kotaeru hitsuyou ga arimasu. Tatoeba, 'I am not sure about the past naming customs, but nowadays, due to modernization and social media, many Chinese people choose Western names.' to iu fuu ni shite kudasai.

예시: I am not sure about the past naming customs, but nowadays, due to modernization and social media, many Chinese people choose Western names.

제안: Kotae ga fumei de, bunshou no imi ga wakarimasen. Motto seikaku ni, rikai shi yasui you ni kotaeru hitsuyou ga arimasu. Tatoeba, 'One of the most popular names in China is Wang Wei, which I have seen often in movies.' to iu fuu ni shite kudasai.

예시: One of the most popular names in China is Wang Wei, which I have seen often in movies.

× Yo, Oh my name refers to the name of the greatest St. that has lived in ancient India.

✓ Oh, my name refers to the name of the greatest saint who lived in ancient India.

The phrase 'that has lived' is incorrect here because the relative clause refers to a specific person in the past. The correct form is 'who lived' using the simple past tense and 'who' as the relative pronoun for people.

× Well, I would like to source the name who sounds pretty good, uh, and have some meanings to have some meanings and some religious significance, such as the name of some guys, our card increases kind of my definition.

✓ Well, I would like to choose a name that sounds pretty good and has some meaning and some religious significance, such as the names of some guys, or cardinals, kind of my definition.

The pronoun 'who' is incorrectly used for 'name'; it should be 'that' for things. Also, 'have some meanings to have some meanings' is repetitive and incorrect; it should be 'has some meaning'. The sentence is also unclear and needs restructuring for clarity.

× No, no, my name is the earliest one. Don't. Nobody in my family do have it, but I only have found 2, not 3 people around my lifetime having the same name as of me.

✓ No, no, my name is the earliest one. Nobody in my family has it, but I have found only 2, not 3, people in my lifetime having the same name as me.

The verb 'do have' is incorrect with 'nobody' which is singular; it should be 'has'. Also, 'I only have found' should be 'I have found only'. The phrase 'as of me' is incorrect; it should be 'as me'.

× No, I do not have any idea what design skills are and how do we have how do they used to keep their names to that saddle?

✓ No, I do not have any idea what naming skills are or how they used to keep their names in the past.

The original sentence is confusing and contains repeated questions improperly structured. The corrected sentence simplifies and clarifies the intended meaning.

× But I think, yeah, there might be a very difference between now and then because of the modernization and this social media, they have turned to have Western name, I believe.

✓ But I think, yeah, there might be a big difference between now and then because of modernization and social media; they have started to have Western names, I believe.

'A very difference' is incorrect; it should be 'a big difference'. 'This social media' should be 'social media' without 'this'. 'Turned to have' is incorrect; 'started to have' or 'adopted' is better. 'Western name' should be plural 'Western names'.

× I will lick wine is the one of the famous name over there because I have seen a lot of movie and to compare with the typical most companion I think one has came a lot.

✓ I think 'Li Wei' is one of the famous names over there because I have seen it a lot in movies, and compared with the typical most common names, I think this one has appeared a lot.

The original sentence has many errors: 'I will lick wine' is likely a mishearing or typo for a name like 'Li Wei'. 'One of the famous name' should be 'one of the famous names'. 'A lot of movie' should be 'a lot of movies'. 'Typical most companion' is unclear; likely 'typical most common names'. 'Has came' should be 'has appeared' or 'has come'.