Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较为简单且有些重复。建议加强句子连贯性，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: Yes, my name follows a Chinese tradition. The characters "Wen Wong" symbolize good fortune and luck, which reflects my parents' hopes for my future success.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议注意时态和主谓一致，使用连接词使表达更自然。

예시: I would choose my child's name based on Chinese traditions, selecting characters that mean luck or happiness. However, I understand that my child might prefer to change it when they become an adult.

제안: 回答中信息表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并避免不必要的细节。

예시: No, no one in my family has the same name as me because in China, names are usually unique within a family.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议理清思路，使用正确的句子结构和连接词，使表达更连贯。

예시: There are differences between generations. In the past, names often reflected patriotism, like building or loving the country. Nowadays, names are more casual, and people choose them based on personal preference or tradition.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，信息表达模糊。建议直接回答问题，提供具体例子，并注意语法准确。

예시: Yes, some names are very popular in China because they express parents' pride. For example, the name "Wei" is common and means greatness.

× I think my parents help me have a good aspect in future.

✓ I think my parents help me have a good future.

这里的“aspect”用法不当，应该用“future”表示“未来”。“aspect”是“方面”的意思，不符合语境。

× He had right to change his name when he become a adult.

✓ He has the right to change his name when he becomes an adult.

“had”应改为现在时“has”，因为这里表达的是一般事实；“become”应改为第三人称单数形式“becomes”；“a adult”前应加不定冠词“an”，因为“adult”以元音音素开头。

× Maybe my children don't like that.

✓ Maybe my child doesn't like that.

前文提到“his name”，指单数，因此“children”应改为单数“child”，动词也相应改为“doesn't”。

× No, in China everyone's name is unique and we have over 10 million names in China.

✓ No, in China everyone's name is unique and we have over 10 million people in China.

“names”与“10 million”搭配不合适，应该是“10 million people”，表示人数。

× we just only have 10 family members so there is no name, same as me.

✓ we only have 10 family members, so no one has the same name as me.

“just only”重复，改为“only”；“there is no name, same as me”表达不清，应改为“no one has the same name as me”。

× Icing there are different the same compare with different generation.

✓ Actually, there are differences and similarities when comparing different generations.

原句语序混乱，词语使用错误，需调整为正确的句子结构。

× In the past people's name always depend on the country, like build the country, love the country.

✓ In the past, people's names always depended on the country, like building the country, loving the country.

“depend”应为过去式“depended”；“name”应为复数“names”；“like build”应改为动名词形式“like building”。

× But is nowadays the name become more casual.

✓ But nowadays, names have become more casual.

“is”多余，应去掉；“name”应为复数“names”；“become”应用现在完成时“have become”。

× People can choose their name with their love or just depend on China tradition.

✓ People can choose their names based on their preferences or just depend on Chinese tradition.

“choose their name with their love”表达不当，改为“based on their preferences”；“China tradition”应为“Chinese tradition”。

× Yes, the name is how it means parents are proud about their children, and in China, over million of people were granted this name.

✓ Yes, the name shows how proud parents are of their children, and in China, over a million people have been given this name.

“the name is how it means”表达不清，应改为“the name shows”；“over million of people”缺少冠词，应为“over a million people”；“were granted”改为现在完成时“have been given”。