Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınız doğal ancak dilbilgisi ve akıcılık açısından geliştirilmelidir. "before I born" ifadesi yanlış, "before I was born" olmalı. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha akıcı yapmak için bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz.

예시: Yes, my name has a special meaning. My sister dreamed about me before I was born, so she decided to name me Rhea, which means "dream" in English. This is why my name is very special to me.

제안: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. "I haven't think" yerine "I haven't thought" kullanılmalı. Ayrıca, cevabınızı daha net ve doğrudan yapmalısınız. Gereksiz tekrarları azaltın ve bağlaçlarla cümleleri bağlayın.

예시: That's an interesting question. I haven't thought about it yet, so I don't know how I would choose names for the next generation. However, I believe I would consider meaningful names that reflect our family's values.

제안: Cevabınız açık ancak "I I'm" gibi tekrarlar ve gereksiz ifadeler var. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir cevap için bu tekrarları kaldırın ve cümlenizi kısaltın.

예시: No, no one in my family has the same name as me. In fact, even outside my family, I haven't met anyone with my name yet.

제안: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve doğal olmayan ifadeler var. "I would be lied to you" yerine "I would be lying to you" kullanılmalı. Ayrıca, cevabınızı daha kibar ve doğal yapmak için farklı ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.

예시: I'm sorry, but I don't have enough information about how Chinese people name their children now or in the past, so I can't answer this question accurately.

제안: Cevabınızda tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "Chinese idol idols" ifadesi tekrarlı ve yanlış. Ayrıca, "might be popular than" yerine "might be more popular than" kullanılmalı. Daha doğal ve net ifadeler kullanın.

예시: I don't know much about Chinese names, but I think names of popular Chinese celebrities might be more popular than others in China.

× Yes I have, my sister saw me in her dream before I born and she decided to name me Rhea which is mean dream in English and this is my special meaning of my name.

✓ Yes, I have. My sister saw me in her dream before I was born, and she decided to name me Rhea, which means dream in English, and this is the special meaning of my name.

The modal verb 'have' is used incorrectly here; 'Yes, I have' is acceptable but the sentence lacks proper punctuation and verb forms. 'Before I born' is incorrect; the correct past participle form 'was born' should be used. 'Which is mean' should be 'which means' to agree with the singular subject. Proper punctuation and conjunctions improve clarity.

× Yeah, that's a great question actually. But I haven't think about this yet and I don't know what to name. I don't know how would I choose names for the next generation because you know, it's way, it's something different from now.

✓ Yeah, that's a great question actually. But I haven't thought about this yet, and I don't know what to name. I don't know how I would choose names for the next generation because, you know, it's something different from now.

The modal verb 'haven't think' is incorrect; the past participle 'thought' should be used after 'haven't'. The word order in 'how would I choose' is incorrect in indirect questions; it should be 'how I would choose'. Removing unnecessary commas and filler words improves sentence flow.

× No, I don't have anyone who has the same name as me. And actually I I'm 20 years old and I haven't seen any single person who has the same name as me.

✓ No, I don't know anyone who has the same name as me. Actually, I'm 20 years old, and I haven't seen a single person who has the same name as me.

The phrase 'I don't have anyone' is awkward; 'I don't know anyone' is more natural. 'Any single person' should be 'a single person' to correctly use the singular quantifier. Also, removing the repeated 'I' and adding commas improves clarity.

× If I say anything about this question, I would be lied to you because I don't have any information about Chinese and I don't even know how they're naming children now or in the past. I will pass this question.

✓ If I say anything about this question, I would be lying to you because I don't have any information about Chinese names, and I don't even know how they name children now or in the past. I will pass this question.

The phrase 'would be lied to you' is incorrect; the correct form is 'would be lying to you' using the present participle after 'would be'. 'They're naming' can be simplified to 'they name' for general statements. Adding 'names' after 'Chinese' clarifies the meaning.

× As I said before, I don't have any information about Chinese names, but maybe the names that Chinese idol idols have might be popular than other names in China.

✓ As I said before, I don't have any information about Chinese names, but maybe the names that Chinese idols have might be more popular than other names in China.

The phrase 'idol idols' is redundant; 'idols' suffices. The comparative 'popular than' is incorrect; it should be 'more popular than'. The modal verb 'might be' is used correctly here.