Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, say: "My name doesn't have a special meaning; my parents chose it because they liked how easy it is to pronounce in my country."

예시: My name doesn't have a special meaning; my parents chose it because they liked how easy it is to pronounce in my country.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be more fluent and natural. Use linking words and avoid hesitation. For example: "I would choose a short name that is easy to pronounce in many languages and also has a meaningful significance."

예시: I would choose a short name that is easy to pronounce in many languages and also has a meaningful significance.

제안: Your answer is good but could be more concise and coherent by using linking words. For example: "No one in my family shares my name because, in our culture, we prefer unique and special names that relatives do not have."

예시: No one in my family shares my name because, in our culture, we prefer unique and special names that relatives do not have.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and fluency. Avoid fillers and incomplete sentences. Try: "Yes, there is a big difference. In the past, Chinese people used traditional names, but nowadays, they prefer trendy and easy-to-pronounce names."

예시: Yes, there is a big difference. In the past, Chinese people used traditional names, but nowadays, they prefer trendy and easy-to-pronounce names.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a complete, coherent response with specific details. For example: "Yes, some names were very popular in the 1980s, with one in six people sharing them. However, for those born after 2000, naming trends have become more diverse."

예시: Yes, some names were very popular in the 1980s, with one in six people sharing them. However, for those born after 2000, naming trends have become more diverse.

× Not really, it's just easy pronounced in my in my country and my parents, they choose because they like it.

✓ Not really, it's just easy to pronounce in my country and my parents chose it because they liked it.

The phrase 'easy pronounced' is incorrect; the correct form is 'easy to pronounce' because 'easy' is followed by the infinitive form of the verb. Also, 'choose' and 'like' should be in the past tense 'chose' and 'liked' to match the past action described.

× I will choose a name which is very short, easy to pronounce in many languages and as well something which has a meaning maybe.

✓ I will choose a name which is very short, easy to pronounce in many languages, and also something which has a meaning, maybe.

The sentence is mostly correct, but adding a comma before 'and also' improves clarity. The modal verb 'will' is correctly used for future tense.

× No one in my family has the same name as me and this is not in our culture.

✓ No one in my family has the same name as me, and this is not part of our culture.

The phrase 'not in our culture' is better expressed as 'not part of our culture' for clarity. The singular and plural forms are correct here.

× So usually we try to find names which are unique and special, but not a name which our relatives can have.

✓ So usually we try to find names which are unique and special, but not names that our relatives have.

The phrase 'not a name which our relatives can have' is awkward. It is better to say 'not names that our relatives have' to correctly refer to multiple names and use appropriate relative pronouns.

× I believe it's a big difference because before they used to name uh, old old name, traditional name and nowadays is more uh about trendy names, easy to pronounce some cool names like.

✓ I believe there is a big difference because before, they used to give old, traditional names, and nowadays it is more about trendy names, easy to pronounce, and some cool names.

The sentence had missing subjects and incorrect verb forms. 'It's a big difference' should be 'there is a big difference' to correctly express existence. Also, 'nowadays is more' should be 'nowadays it is more' to include the subject. The phrase 'name uh, old old name, traditional name' is corrected to 'give old, traditional names' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× If we talk for 18th generation, yes is they have names which is very popular because you can find one in six people with that name.

✓ If we talk about the 18th generation, yes, they have names which are very popular because you can find one in six people with that name.

The phrase 'talk for' should be 'talk about'. 'Yes is they have' is incorrect; it should be 'yes, they have'. 'Names which is' should be 'names which are' to agree in number with the plural noun 'names'.

× If we speak for generation, the 2000 generation, that is a different because.

✓ If we speak about the 2000 generation, it is different because...

The phrase 'speak for generation' should be 'speak about the generation'. 'That is a different because' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'it is different because' followed by an explanation. The sentence is incomplete and needs completion for clarity.