Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, "Oh my name" is unclear and unnecessary. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise, and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, my name is Fang Jia Lu. 'Fang' is a common Chinese surname, and 'Jia Lu' means family happiness. My parents chose this name because they wish for a happy family life.

제안: Your answer has some unclear expressions and mistakes. For example, "unlike western or joy" and "make sure they sound unpleasant" contradict the idea of positive names. Please clarify your ideas and use correct vocabulary. Also, avoid negative phrases when talking about positive meanings.

예시: I would choose names that have positive meanings and sound pleasant. For example, names that represent happiness or strength, because I believe a good name can influence a person's life.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but has some awkward phrases like "chased a special name" and minor grammar issues. Try to use more natural expressions and correct prepositions, such as "have the same name as me". Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: No, no one in my family has the same name as me because my parents wanted me to have a unique identity. In Chinese culture, it is uncommon for family members to share the same name.

제안: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases, such as "now states parents". Please use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, add linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, in the past, Chinese names often reflected values like loyalty. However, nowadays, parents tend to choose more creative and unique names. Additionally, modern names are usually easier to write.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Phrases like "someone like for boys and girls" and "think on this name are very wonderful" are confusing. Please clarify your ideas, use correct grammar, and provide specific examples of popular names.

예시: Yes, in recent years, names like 'Wei' for boys and 'Mei' for girls have become popular because parents believe these names have positive meanings, such as strength and beauty.

× Oh my name, My parents wish for a happy family life.

✓ Oh, my name means my parents wish for a happy family life.

The original sentence uses 'Oh my name' incorrectly and lacks a verb to connect the ideas. The phrase 'My parents wish for a happy family life' is the intended meaning. Correcting it to 'Oh, my name means my parents wish for a happy family life' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× I would consider both a meaning and precision.

✓ I would consider both meaning and pronunciation.

The phrase 'both a meaning and precision' is incorrect because 'meaning' and 'precision' are abstract nouns and 'a' is not appropriate here. Also, 'precision' is likely a misuse; 'pronunciation' fits better in the context of choosing names. Removing 'a' and replacing 'precision' with 'pronunciation' improves clarity and correctness.

× I would pick names with positive meanings, unlike western or joy, and make sure they sound unpleasant.

✓ I would pick names with positive meanings, like 'western' or 'joy', and make sure they sound pleasant.

The original sentence uses 'unlike' incorrectly and contradicts itself by saying 'make sure they sound unpleasant' when the context suggests the opposite. Changing 'unlike' to 'like' and 'unpleasant' to 'pleasant' corrects the meaning and adjective usage.

× no one in my family has the same name with me.

✓ no one in my family has the same name as me.

The correct preposition to compare names is 'as' not 'with'. The phrase 'the same name as me' is the standard expression.

× All because my parents wanted me to have a unique identity so they chased a special name just for me.

✓ This is all because my parents wanted me to have a unique identity, so they chose a special name just for me.

The sentence lacks a subject in the first clause and uses 'chased' incorrectly. Adding 'This is' clarifies the sentence, and replacing 'chased' with 'chose' corrects the verb usage.

× in the past Chinese names often reflected some values like loyalty, but now states parents tend to choose more creative and unique names.

✓ In the past, Chinese names often reflected values like loyalty, but now parents tend to choose more creative and unique names.

The phrase 'states parents' is incorrect; likely a typo for 'some parents' or just 'parents'. Removing 'states' corrects the sentence. Also, adding a comma after 'In the past' improves readability.

× someone like for boys and girls have become more popular, because parents think on this name are very wonderful and have a positive meanings unlike jewelry and wisdom.

✓ Some names for boys and girls have become more popular because parents think these names are wonderful and have positive meanings, unlike 'jewelry' and 'wisdom'.

The original sentence misuses 'someone like' instead of 'some names', and 'think on this name are' is incorrect subject-verb agreement and preposition usage. Correcting to 'Some names' and 'think these names are' fixes pronoun and verb agreement errors. Also, 'meanings' should be plural without 'a' before it.