Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit long and has some grammatical errors. Try to keep your answer concise and use correct verb forms. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say: "Yes, my name has a special meaning; it means good looking and attractive. My mother chose it because she likes the name, and it is common in my country. Moreover, it holds religious significance as one of our imams had this name."

예시: Yes, my name has a special meaning; it means good looking and attractive. My mother chose it because she likes the name, and it is common in my country. Moreover, it holds religious significance as one of our imams had this name.

제안: Your answer is clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and adding linking words for coherence. For example, say: "I would prefer to choose names for my children that have a nice meaning because, in my opinion, a name reflects a person's personality. Therefore, it is very important to choose children's names wisely."

예시: I would prefer to choose names for my children that have a nice meaning because, in my opinion, a name reflects a person's personality. Therefore, it is very important to choose children's names wisely.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and lacks linking words. Try to use correct articles and plural forms, and connect your ideas clearly. For example: "Yes, certainly, two of my cousins have the same name as me. One is younger, and the other is older, so I am the middle one among us."

예시: Yes, certainly, two of my cousins have the same name as me. One is younger, and the other is older, so I am the middle one among us.

제안: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to be more specific and use linking words. For example: "Although I am not very familiar with Chinese culture, I believe there are differences in how children are named now compared to the past. Nowadays, people tend to choose names more carefully to reflect certain qualities."

예시: Although I am not very familiar with Chinese culture, I believe there are differences in how children are named now compared to the past. Nowadays, people tend to choose names more carefully to reflect certain qualities.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example: "Although I am not very familiar with Chinese culture, I believe some names are more popular than others. Many popular names are inspired by famous actors and heroes."

예시: Although I am not very familiar with Chinese culture, I believe some names are more popular than others. Many popular names are inspired by famous actors and heroes.

× Yes, my name have a special meaning which means good looking and attractive.

✓ Yes, my name has a special meaning which means good looking and attractive.

The subject 'name' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number.

× My name was chosen by my mother because she likes this name and it's very common in my country and also it is very it has very importance in our religion because one of our imam has this name.

✓ My name was chosen by my mother because she likes this name and it's very common in my country and also it has great importance in our religion because one of our imams has this name.

The phrase 'it is very it has very importance' is incorrect and redundant; it should be simplified to 'it has great importance'. Also, 'imam' should be pluralized to 'imams' if referring to one among several.

× I will prefer choosing name for my children's which usually have a nice meaning because in my opinion name reflects the personality of a person.

✓ I will prefer choosing names for my children which usually have a nice meaning because in my opinion a name reflects the personality of a person.

'Children's' is possessive and incorrect here; it should be 'children' plural. Also, 'name' should be plural 'names' to match 'choosing'. 'Name' in 'name reflects' should be singular and preceded by 'a'.

× So it's very important to choose your children name very wisely.

✓ So it's very important to choose your children's names very wisely.

'Children' is plural and requires possessive form 'children's' to modify 'names'. Also, 'name' should be plural 'names' to match 'children's'.

× Yes certainly my 2 cousins have a same name.

✓ Yes certainly my 2 cousins have the same name.

The article 'a' is incorrect before 'same name'; 'the same name' is the correct phrase.

× 1 is younger than me and one is elder and I am a middle 1 so two of them have the same name as mine.

✓ One is younger than me and one is older and I am the middle one, so two of them have the same name as mine.

Use 'one' instead of '1' in formal speech. 'Elder' is better replaced with 'older' for people. 'A middle 1' should be 'the middle one' for clarity and correctness.

× Well, I'm not much aware about Chinese culture, but I think yes, there is much difference about how the they choose name of their children now and compared to the past.

✓ Well, I'm not very aware of Chinese culture, but I think yes, there is much difference in how they choose the names of their children now compared to the past.

'Not much aware about' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'not very aware of'. 'The they' is redundant; remove 'the'. 'Choose name' should be 'choose the names'. 'Compared to the past' should be connected properly.

× Because now as in advanced era, everyone choose their name, name of the children very wisely and the select name that reflected.

✓ Because now, in this advanced era, everyone chooses their children's names very wisely and selects names that reflect their meaning.

'Choose' should be 'chooses' for third person singular 'everyone'. 'Name of the children' should be 'children's names'. 'The select name that reflected' is incorrect; should be 'selects names that reflect'.

× Well, I am not very much familiar with Chinese culture, but I believe there are certain names that are very much popular among peoples and fewer because much names in China are on the names of actors, film actors and their heroes.

✓ Well, I am not very familiar with Chinese culture, but I believe there are certain names that are very popular among people and fewer because many names in China are based on the names of actors, film actors, and their heroes.

'Very much familiar' should be 'very familiar'. 'Peoples' should be 'people'. 'Much names' should be 'many names'. 'Are on the names' should be 'are based on the names'.