Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，建议注意句子结构，避免重复词汇，并且补充更多细节使回答更丰富。

예시: Yes, my Chinese name is Yixin, which means "one star." My parents chose this name because they hope I will be useful and healthy throughout my life.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，建议使用更准确的表达，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I would like to use a dictionary to find unique names for my child. However, I also believe that when my child grows up, they should have the freedom to choose their own name.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，建议分句表达，避免句子过长，并补充具体细节。

예시: No, no one in my family shares the same name as me. Each family member has a unique name that reflects their personality and identity.

제안: 回答较好，但时态使用不准确，建议注意时态一致，并且可以增加更多细节。

예시: Yes, in the past, many parents chose their children's names using a dictionary. Nowadays, many people use AI technology to find interesting and unique names.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅，建议简化句子结构并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: Yes, some names are more popular in China. For example, many parents like to name their daughters Yixin because it has a beautiful meaning.

× My Chinese name called Yixin, it means one star.

✓ My Chinese name is Yixin, it means 'one star'.

句子缺少谓语动词“is”，导致句子结构不完整。应使用“is”连接主语和表语，形成完整句子。

× My parents wished me be useful and healthy and and it's a special meaning for.

✓ My parents wished me to be useful and healthy, and it has a special meaning.

动词“wish”后应接不定式“to be”，且句子末尾“it's a special meaning for”结构不完整，应改为“it has a special meaning”。

× Well, I like to check dictionary to choose very different names for my child.

✓ Well, I like to check the dictionary to choose very different names for my child.

“dictionary”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特指某一本词典。

× And I also think my child has has a choice to choose their own name when they grow up.

✓ And I also think my child will have a choice to choose their own name when they grow up.

句子描述未来情况，应使用将来时“will have”，而非现在时“has”。

× Not really everyone in my family has their own unique name and it represents their own personality and identity and my family will choose the different meanings for.

✓ Not really, everyone in my family has their own unique name, and it represents their own personality and identity. My family will choose different meanings for them.

句子中“the different meanings”应去掉定冠词“the”，且句子结构不完整，需分句并补充代词“them”。

× Yes, in the past many parents choose the children's name through dictionary, but now many people will use AI to search some interesting and unique names.

✓ Yes, in the past many parents chose their children's names through the dictionary, but now many people use AI to search for some interesting and unique names.

描述过去的动作应使用过去式“chose”，且“children's name”应为复数“children's names”，并且“search”后应加介词“for”。

× Absolutely, In my country we have many popular names, for example girl many parents like naming girls called Yixin because it's it is a good meaningful.

✓ Absolutely, in my country we have many popular names. For example, many parents like naming girls Yixin because it is meaningful.

句子中“for example girl”结构不正确，应分句并去掉多余词汇；“a good meaningful”搭配错误，应改为“meaningful”。