Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be more grammatically correct and clearer. Use singular verbs with singular subjects, and avoid redundancy. Also, provide a concise explanation with linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, my name has a special meaning related to the Lord. According to history, Daksh was an ancient king of India, and the name symbolizes victory.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, pay attention to grammar and sentence structure.

예시: I would choose names for my children by using mobile apps and websites that suggest meaningful and popular names, as they provide a variety of options.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and grammatically incorrect. Use singular/plural forms correctly and provide a clear reason with linking words to improve coherence.

예시: No, no one in my family has the same name because my grandmother chose it, and it is unique with historical significance.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and could be more precise. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide clearer examples to support your point.

예시: Yes, naming trends have changed over time. For instance, traditional names like Daksh were common in the past, while modern names like Suraj are more popular now.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Also, the examples given are not typical Chinese names. Try to provide relevant examples and explain clearly using correct grammar.

예시: Yes, some names are more popular in China, such as Wei, Li, and Zhang. These names are common and have positive meanings.

× Yes, my name have a special meaning which is directed to Lord.

✓ Yes, my name has a special meaning which is directed to Lord.

The subject 'name' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.

× My name is Daksh and according to history this name is the king of India in ancient time period and ducks is related to winning.

✓ My name is Daksh and according to history this name was the name of a king of India in ancient times and Daksh is related to winning.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'is the king' instead of 'was the name of a king' to refer to the past. Also, 'ducks' seems to be a typo for 'Daksh'. 'Time period' should be plural 'times'. This involves singular/plural and tense issues.

× I like to choose name for my next generation by using mobile phone apps.

✓ I like to choose names for my next generation by using mobile phone apps.

The word 'name' should be plural 'names' because it refers to choosing more than one name for future generations. This is a singular and plural issue.

× There are a lot of websites choosing good name for future children's and also now I prefer to other using mobile apps for getting a good name for their children.

✓ There are a lot of websites choosing good names for future children and also now I prefer others using mobile apps to get a good name for their children.

'Name' should be plural 'names' to match 'websites choosing good names'. 'Children's' is incorrect possessive; it should be 'children' plural. 'Prefer to other' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer others'. This involves singular/plural and preposition use.

× No, no one people have same name because the meaning of my name is related to ancient time period and my name is put by my grandmother and there was no related to my name in my family.

✓ No, no one has the same name because the meaning of my name is related to an ancient time period and my name was given by my grandmother and there is no one related to my name in my family.

'No one people' is incorrect; 'no one' is singular and should be followed by 'has'. 'Is put' should be past tense 'was given'. 'There was no related to my name' is incorrect; it should be 'there is no one related'. This involves singular/plural, past tense, and sentence structure issues.

× Yes, there are many differences between children names as now and in the past because according to the time period and trend the name changed according to trend.

✓ Yes, there are many differences between children's names now and in the past because according to the time period and trend the names changed accordingly.

'Children names' should be possessive 'children's names'. 'Name changed' should be plural 'names changed' to agree with 'differences'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× There are many name which is popular than China like Maharaja, Bhanuparthap and Suraj.

✓ There are many names which are more popular than those in China like Maharaja, Bhanuparthap and Suraj.

'Name' should be plural 'names'. 'Which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'names'. 'Popular than China' is incorrect; it should be 'more popular than those in China'. This is a singular/plural and comparison issue.