Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然，但存在冗余和语法错误，如“special particular meaning”重复，且句子较长，建议简化表达并注意语法准确性。

예시: My name is Natalie, named after the American actress Natalie Portman. My mother admired her unique personality and beauty, so she chose this name for me.

제안: 回答结构清晰，但表达不够自然，且部分句子不够流畅，如“characters in which I admire most”应为“characters whom I admire most”。建议使用更自然的表达和连接词。

예시: I would choose names for my children based on characters from literature that I admire. Also, I might pick names of people I know who have admirable qualities.

제안: 语法错误明显，如“No one in my family have”应为“has”，且表达不够连贯，建议注意主谓一致并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: No one in my family has the same name as me because we prefer diversity. Also, we like to have the freedom to choose our own names.

제안: 表达有些笨拙，如“more close minds”应为“narrower minds”，且句子较长，建议简化句子并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: There are differences in naming children now compared to the past. Previously, people had narrower views, but now, influenced by global cultures, naming has become more diverse.

제안: 回答内容重复且表达不够简洁，使用“etcetera”显得不够正式，建议具体说明并避免使用模糊词汇。

예시: Yes, some names are more popular in China because many parents hope their children will have certain qualities or careers, so they choose similar meaningful names.

× No one in my family have the same name as me.

✓ No one in my family has the same name as me.

“No one”是单数，因此谓语动词应使用单数形式“has”，而不是复数形式“have”。

× I might choose the characters in which I admire most.

✓ I might choose the characters whom I admire most.

“characters”指人时，关系代词应使用“whom”而不是“which”，因为“which”用于物或动物。

× There are differences between how Chinese name their children before and right now in the present.

✓ There are differences between how Chinese name their children before and how they do right now.

原句中“between...before and right now in the present”结构不清晰，应明确比较的两个部分，使用“between...and...”结构连接两个完整的从句。

× we want our names to be more diverse instead of repeating.

✓ we want our names to be more diverse instead of being repeated.

“repeating”作为动名词在此处用法不当，应使用被动形式“being repeated”表示“名字被重复”。

× I might choose from people that I really know and I like their characteristics.

✓ I might choose from people whom I really know and whose characteristics I like.

“people”指人时，关系代词应使用“whom”作宾语，且“their characteristics”应改为“whose characteristics”表示所属关系。