Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your response more concise and grammatically correct, and avoid repeating words. Also, clarify your ideas with better sentence structure.

예시: No, I don't think my name has a special meaning, but sometimes I hear it means 'love to God,' which I find beautiful. Regardless of its meaning, I like my name because it is unique and personal to me.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Focus on giving a clear, direct response with specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I would choose unique names with special meanings for my children. For example, I like short names that are easy to pronounce, like 'Leanne,' which means 'beloved by everyone.' This way, they won't face difficulties with their names.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and some unclear expressions. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer phrasing. Also, avoid redundancy and organize your ideas logically with linking words.

예시: No, no one in my family has the same name as me, so I feel unique and special. However, my sister's name is quite common, which sometimes makes her feel less distinctive.

제안: Your answer is vague and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to be more specific and clear about the differences, and use proper sentence structure and linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Although I'm not very familiar with all the names, I believe there are many differences. In the past, Chinese names were longer and harder to relate to, but now parents tend to choose shorter, more meaningful names that give children a distinct identity.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Focus on giving a clear response with specific examples and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, some names are more popular in China, such as 'Lee,' because they are easy to pronounce and have positive meanings. However, some parents prefer unique names that convey positive qualities to their children.

× No, I didn't think so my name has any type of special meaning but sometime I hear that it means love to God, which which is seems very beautiful.

✓ No, I don't think my name has any type of special meaning but sometimes I hear that it means love to God, which seems very beautiful.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'didn't think' which is past tense, but the context is present. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'which which is seems' is redundant and incorrect; 'which seems' is correct.

× And regardless of the meetings, I like my name because it is a unique and personal to me.

✓ And regardless of the meanings, I like my name because it is unique and personal to me.

The word 'meetings' is incorrect; it should be 'meanings'. Also, 'a unique' is incorrect because 'unique' is an absolute adjective and does not take an article 'a'.

× Well, I prefer to choose our unique name which has some special meanings and it was a unique also.

✓ Well, I prefer to choose a unique name which has some special meanings and is unique as well.

The pronoun 'our' is incorrect when referring to a name for the next generation; 'a' is appropriate. Also, 'it was a unique also' is awkward; 'is unique as well' is better.

× For example, her braid, it means everyone loves her and it was very short and everyone called her various Leanne.

✓ For example, her name means everyone loves her, and it is very short and everyone calls her various Leanne.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'was' and 'called' when present tense is appropriate. Also, 'her braid' seems incorrect; likely 'her name' is intended.

× It will face not any type of difficulty.

✓ It will not face any type of difficulty.

The word order is incorrect; 'will not face' is the correct order for negation with modal verbs.

× No, in my family no one have the same name as me and I feel very unique and special But I am very very sorry for my sister because its name was quite common and it's used by most of the peoples and and I thought it was this sometime make her feel that it was unless distinctive to me.

✓ No, in my family no one has the same name as me and I feel very unique and special. But I am very sorry for my sister because her name is quite common and it's used by most people, and I think this sometimes makes her feel that it is less distinctive than mine.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject 'no one'. 'Its name' should be 'her name' referring to sister. 'Peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is the correct plural. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Unless distinctive' should be 'less distinctive'. Also, sentence structure and punctuation needed correction.

× Well, I do not know about their names but I feel that yes there is a load of difference.

✓ Well, I do not know about their names but I feel that yes there is a lot of difference.

'Load' is informal and incorrect here; 'a lot of' is the correct phrase to express quantity.

× Firstly they have given us such name which has been quite difficult to correlate to anybody but now they are giving a short and suggestive name which given our distinctive identity to them.

✓ Firstly, they gave us such names which have been quite difficult to relate to anybody, but now they are giving short and suggestive names which give distinctive identity to them.

The sentence mixes tenses incorrectly. 'Have given' should be 'gave' for past action. 'Correlate to' is incorrect; 'relate to' is better. 'Given' should be 'give' to match present tense. Also, plural forms 'names' are more appropriate.

× Yes, of course there are some names that are more popular other than in China.

✓ Yes, of course there are some names that are more popular than others in China.

The phrase 'more popular other than in China' is incorrect. The correct comparative phrase is 'more popular than others in China'.

× For example, Lee and we are very popular because it was easy to pronounce and go and it also given us and such as you meaning.

✓ For example, Lee and Wei are very popular because they are easy to pronounce and also give us such a meaning.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'was' and 'given' when present tense is appropriate. 'Go' is unclear and likely incorrect. 'We' should be 'Wei' as a name. Sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× But some parents prefer to given such a name to their children which are quite unique and given a positive attitude also.

✓ But some parents prefer to give such names to their children which are quite unique and also give a positive attitude.

'Prefer to given' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to give'. 'Name' should be plural 'names' to agree with 'some parents'. 'Given' should be 'give' to maintain present tense.