Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Please improve your answer by making it more clear and grammatically correct. Use a topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add specific supporting details. Avoid unclear phrases and try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, my name has a special meaning. It means knowledge or wisdom, which are qualities I value highly. I like my name because it reflects these important traits.

제안: Try to organize your answer more clearly and use complete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain the process in a logical order. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and clarify your points.

예시: In my culture, choosing a name is very important and based on auspicious factors. First, we consider the exact date and time when the baby is born. Then, according to traditional beliefs, there is a list of specific letters and words that should be included in the name to bring good luck.

제안: Please answer the question directly and clearly. Use correct grammar and avoid confusing phrases. Explain your answer with specific cultural details and use linking words to make your response coherent.

예시: No, no one in my family has the same name as me. According to Thai tradition, we do not name children after their father to avoid confusion. This is different from American or European cultures where naming after parents is more common.

제안: Try to give a clearer and more relevant answer. If you are unsure, you can say so but then add related information logically. Use linking words and avoid unclear or incomplete sentences.

예시: I'm not sure about the differences in how Chinese people name their children now compared to the past. However, I think many people around the world now choose English names in addition to their original names. For example, some Chinese people use English names like John instead of traditional Chinese names.

제안: Try to answer the question more directly and provide specific details if possible. If you don't know, you can say so but then add related information logically. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I'm not from China, so I don't know which names are most popular there. However, I know that in China, people often address each other by their last names, which is different from some other cultures.

× Yes it does. Entire Mehta mean. Knowledge or wisdom an I like my name because it we fix quality that are important to me.

✓ Yes, it does. 'Entire Mehta' means knowledge or wisdom, and I like my name because it reflects qualities that are important to me.

The original sentence has fragmented structure and missing words, making it unclear. Adding necessary verbs and conjunctions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× In my culture, choosing a name is very important and based on auspicious factors. First, we consider the exact date and time. When the baby is born. Then according to traditional believe there is a list of specific letter and word and alphabet that you included in the name. 2.

✓ In my culture, choosing a name is very important and is based on auspicious factors. First, we consider the exact date and time when the baby is born. Then, according to traditional belief, there is a list of specific letters, words, and alphabets that you include in the name.

The original sentences are fragmented and have incorrect word forms (e.g., 'believe' instead of 'belief', 'letter' instead of 'letters'). Combining fragments and correcting word forms improves grammatical accuracy.

× No it doesn't. So based on Thai traditional belief, beat or name after our father or open father. Because it makes us confused. Which is different from the. American or European culture?

✓ No, it doesn't. So based on Thai traditional belief, we do not name our children after our father or grandfather because it makes us confused, which is different from American or European culture.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear phrasing ('beat or name after our father or open father'). Correcting pronouns and clarifying the sentence structure improves understanding.

× I'm not sure about the difference between Chinese name at the person now, but I think many people around the world. Name Dash I'll more in English name. For example, people would name Jaune louder than any Chinese name.

✓ I'm not sure about the difference between Chinese names at present, but I think many people around the world use English names more. For example, people would name John louder than any Chinese name.

The original sentence has incorrect pronouns and unclear words ('name Dash I'll more in English name', 'Jaune louder'). Correcting pronouns and replacing unclear words with appropriate ones improves clarity.

× I'm not from China so I don't know, but I think they call each other by their last name.

✓ I'm not from China, so I don't know, but I think they call each other by their last names.

The original sentence uses 'last name' in singular when referring to multiple people. Using the plural 'last names' is correct here.