Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding confusion. Start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words. For example, say "No, my name does not have any special meaning. However, my grandmother chose it because it is related to a famous historian woman named Mateer."

예시: No, my name does not have any special meaning. However, my grandmother chose it because it is related to a famous historian woman named Mateer.

제안: Make your answer more complete and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence and add supporting details with linking words. For example, "I would choose inspiring names for my next generation because I want them to remember their identity and values."

예시: I would choose inspiring names for my next generation because I want them to remember their identity and values.

제안: Improve clarity and grammar. Use linking words to explain your answer logically. For example, "No, no one in my family has the same name as me because it is very hard to pronounce and has many letters, so it is difficult to remember."

예시: No, no one in my family has the same name as me because it is very hard to pronounce and has many letters, so it is difficult to remember.

제안: Focus on answering the question clearly and avoid irrelevant information. Use linking words and correct grammar. For example, "I am not from China, so I don't know much about Chinese naming. However, I know that in the past, names were traditional, but now people choose modern and unique names."

예시: I am not from China, so I don't know much about Chinese naming. However, I know that in the past, names were traditional, but now people choose modern and unique names.

제안: Answer the question directly and clearly. If you don't know about China, say so politely and then share relevant information about your own country with linking words. For example, "I am not familiar with popular names in China. However, in India, popular names include Fatma and Pujari."

예시: I am not familiar with popular names in China. However, in India, popular names include Fatma and Pujari.

× No, my name has not any special meaning.

✓ No, my name does not have any special meaning.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'has not' instead of the correct modal verb construction 'does not have' for negation in present simple tense with 'name' as singular noun.

× My name is kept my by my grand mother and she loved that name because it is about a historian woman.

✓ My name was given by my grandmother and she loved that name because it is about a historian woman.

The phrase 'is kept my by my grandmother' is incorrect in structure. The correct passive form is 'was given by my grandmother'. Also, 'grand mother' should be one word 'grandmother'.

× Does she have been Mateer?

✓ Is she Mateer?

The question 'Does she have been Mateer?' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form to ask about identity is 'Is she Mateer?'.

× I choose name.

✓ I choose a name.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before the singular noun 'name'. Also, 'choose' is present tense and correct here.

× For my next generation will be inspiring name that they can remember who they are and what they have to follow.

✓ For my next generation, it will be an inspiring name that they can remember who they are and what they have to follow.

The original sentence lacks a subject and article before 'inspiring name'. Adding 'it will be an' clarifies the sentence structure.

× No. Anyone in my family doesn't have my name because it is very hard to pronounce and they have very big knee with so many letters in it so it is hard to remember.

✓ No. No one in my family has my name because it is very hard to pronounce and it has many letters, so it is hard to remember.

'Anyone' is incorrect in negative sentences; 'No one' is appropriate. Also, 'doesn't have' should be 'has' for subject-verb agreement with 'No one'. 'They have very big knee' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'it has many letters'.

× I am not from China so I can't all about Chinese name but I am from India.

✓ I am not from China so I don't know all about Chinese names but I am from India.

'I can't all about' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I don't know all about'. Also, 'Chinese name' should be plural 'Chinese names'.

× I can tell there's a lot of difference between their name.

✓ I can tell there's a lot of difference between their names.

'Name' should be plural 'names' to match 'their' referring to multiple people.

× In past they generally kept name like guy to see there but now they kept a modern and unique treasure frame.

✓ In the past, they generally kept names like 'Guy to See There' but now they keep modern and unique names.

Missing article 'the' before 'past'. 'Kept' should be 'keep' in present tense for current habits. 'Name' should be plural 'names'. The phrase 'treasure frame' is unclear and replaced with 'names'.

× Then suggest. Seema Garima.

✓ For example, names like Seema and Garima are suggested.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Rephrased to a complete sentence giving examples.

× I am not from China but I control the popular name in India.

✓ I am not from China but I know the popular names in India.

'Control' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'know'. Also, 'name' should be plural 'names'.

× Most popular name in India I Fatma Pujari A.

✓ The most popular names in India are Fatma and Pujari.

Missing article 'The' before 'most popular'. 'Name' should be plural 'names'. The original sentence is incomplete and unclear; corrected to a proper sentence.