Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

예시: Yes, my name has a special meaning. My parents chose it because they wished me to be safe, strong, and ready to face any challenges throughout my life.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Provide a clear opinion and explain your reasoning using linking words. Keep your sentences concise and relevant.

예시: If I were to choose names for my children, I would select elegant names that have meaningful origins. However, I would prefer to choose the names myself rather than asking someone else.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains errors. Respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and provide a reason if necessary. Avoid unnecessary words and repetition.

예시: No, no one in my family shares the same name as me. This is probably because I am an only child.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing. Provide a clear comparison using linking words and specific examples. Avoid vague or incorrect words.

예시: Yes, there are differences. In the past, Chinese parents often gave girls names with protective meanings to prevent harm, whereas nowadays, names tend to be chosen more for their beauty or uniqueness.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains repetition. Provide specific examples with correct pronunciation and clarify your knowledge scope. Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, some names are more popular than others. For example, 'Wei' is a common name for boys, and 'Ying' is popular for girls, especially in Taiwan. However, I am not certain about the trends in mainland China.

× Yes, my parents want to.

✓ Yes, my parents want me to be safe and strong throughout my life.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb and object, making it grammatically incorrect. The phrase 'want to' requires an object or verb complement to complete the meaning. The correction completes the sentence by specifying what the parents want.

× I wanted me to be safe and in the whole life and also being very strong and always prepared for for facing any obstacles in my life.

✓ They wanted me to be safe throughout my life and also to be very strong and always prepared to face any obstacles.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'wanted me' and 'being' without proper structure. The verb 'want' should be followed by an object and an infinitive verb form. Also, 'for facing' is incorrect; it should be 'to face'. The correction fixes these issues for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, I think I would choose some words that I am.

✓ Well, I think I would choose some words that I like.

The phrase 'words that I am' is incomplete and unclear. It likely intends to express preference, so 'words that I like' is appropriate. This correction improves sentence clarity and grammatical structure.

× I think it is really elegant, but I wouldn't tell.

✓ I think it is really elegant, but I wouldn't tell anyone.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'I wouldn't tell', which is incomplete. Adding 'anyone' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I wouldn't. I want to acquire someone to do it for me.

✓ I wouldn't. I want to ask someone to do it for me.

The phrase 'acquire someone' is incorrect because 'acquire' is not used for people in this context. The correct verb is 'ask' when requesting help. This correction improves word choice and sentence meaning.

× I want to do it myself.

✓ I want to do it myself.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no changes.

× No, not anyone in the family had a segment, Semnan asked me.

✓ No, no one in the family has the same name as me.

The original sentence is confusing and contains incorrect words like 'segment' and 'Semnan'. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects singular/plural usage and verb tense.

× That might be because I am the only child in my in my like family.

✓ That might be because I am the only child in my family.

The phrase 'in my in my like family' is redundant and incorrect. Removing the extra words corrects the sentence.

× Well I will say yes, especially how they named their girls in the past diagram dynamic there grows some like.

✓ Well, I would say yes, especially how they named their girls in the past.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains unclear phrases like 'diagram dynamic there grows some like'. The correction removes these and adjusts the tense to fit the context.

× Some swear words to make sure that they wouldn't be in there, wouldn't be harmed by others.

✓ They used some protective words to make sure that the girls wouldn't be harmed by others.

The phrase 'some swear words' is likely a mishearing or mistranslation. The intended meaning is protective or auspicious words. The correction clarifies this and improves sentence structure.

× Well, I would say maybe just how is a is a popular name for boys and yachting is a popular name for for for girls in entire one.

✓ Well, I would say maybe 'Hao' is a popular name for boys and 'Yaqing' is a popular name for girls in Taiwan.

The original sentence has repeated words and unclear phrases like 'entire one'. The correction clarifies the names and location, and removes repetitions.

× I'm not sure about China, but in Taiwan it is that.

✓ I'm not sure about China, but in Taiwan, it is like that.

The phrase 'it is that' is incomplete. Adding 'like' completes the expression and makes the sentence grammatically correct.