Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to give a clear and direct explanation of your name's meaning in simple, correct English. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: My name, Derek, means 'leader' or 'ruler'. It symbolizes a new era and guides people towards the right path.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear words and grammar mistakes. Try to speak clearly and use correct sentence structures. Explain your process logically and use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: I would choose names for my children by brainstorming ideas and asking for suggestions from my family and friends. I would select names that reflect good personality traits to positively influence their lives.

제안: Your answer is mostly clear but a bit repetitive. Try to avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas. Use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer more natural and concise.

예시: No one in my family shares my name because it is unique. However, I have met some other people outside my family who have the same name.

제안: Your answer is honest but could be more fluent. Try to express your lack of knowledge clearly and politely. Use linking words to connect your sentences smoothly.

예시: I am not very familiar with Chinese naming traditions, so I don't know much about how they named their children in the past or now.

제안: Your answer has some factual inaccuracies and unclear phrases. Try to give accurate information and speak clearly. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid unnecessary repetition.

예시: I think some names of famous people, like Jackie Chan, are popular in China because he is a well-known actor. Many parents might choose such names for their children.

× I think my name has some special meaning which is related to all golden time which.

✓ I think my name has some special meaning related to the golden era.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Which is related to all golden time which' is incomplete and confusing. The correction simplifies and clarifies the meaning by using 'related to the golden era', which is a common phrase meaning a significant period.

× Derek it's too or new era of.

✓ Derek represents a new era.

The original sentence is incomplete and grammatically incorrect. 'It's too or new era of' does not form a meaningful sentence. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct statement.

× Time which shows the real path for the people.

✓ It shows the real path for the people.

The phrase 'Time which shows...' is a fragment. The correction completes the sentence by adding a subject 'It' to make it a complete sentence.

× Who is the name like Watch?

✓ Who has a name like that?

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Who is the name like Watch?' does not make sense. The correction rephrases it to a proper question form.

× I will Sue's name for my next Sanderson through different.

✓ I will choose a name for my next generation through different

The original sentence contains incorrect words 'Sue's' and 'Sanderson' which seem to be errors for 'choose' and 'generation'. The correction replaces these with correct words to make the sentence meaningful.

× Idea and brainstorming, axing, asking with my friends and family members as well as with other.

✓ ideas and brainstorming, asking my friends and family members as well as others.

The original sentence has spelling errors ('axing' instead of 'asking') and is incomplete. The correction fixes spelling and improves sentence flow.

× Peoples and naming them with some personality so that it will improve their name and quality of life.

✓ people and naming them with some personality so that it will improve their name and quality of life.

'Peoples' is incorrect here; 'people' is the correct plural form. The sentence is corrected for proper noun usage.

× No one in from my family has same name as me as my name is unique and people usually don't have the same name as me.

✓ No one in my family has the same name as me because my name is unique and people usually don't have the same name as me.

The phrase 'in from my family' is incorrect; 'in my family' is correct. Also, 'has same name' should be 'has the same name' for proper article usage and subject-verb agreement.

× So I have never found anyone in my family members or relatives who have the same name as me.

✓ So I have never found anyone among my family members or relatives who has the same name as me.

'Who have' should be 'who has' because 'anyone' is singular. Also, 'in my family members' is incorrect; 'among my family members' is correct.

× But I have found some other peoples who has same name as.

✓ But I have found some other people who have the same name as me.

'Peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is the correct plural noun. 'Who has' should be 'who have' to agree with plural 'people'. The sentence is completed for clarity.

× I really don't know much about the sign is calls are and how they named their children and.

✓ I really don't know much about the surnames and how they named their children.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors ('sign is calls are'). The correction replaces it with 'surnames' and completes the sentence.

× How they used to name their children at the past.

✓ How they used to name their children in the past.

The phrase 'at the past' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in the past'.

× As I am quite unfamiliar to their culture and other processes so I really don't know about how they name their children.

✓ As I am quite unfamiliar with their culture and other processes, I really don't know how they name their children.

The phrase 'unfamiliar to' should be 'unfamiliar with'. Also, the sentence is improved by removing unnecessary words and adding a comma.

× I think the name Jackie Chan is much more popular in then the others in China as he's one of the.

✓ I think the name Jackie Chan is much more popular than others in China as he is one of the

'In then the others' is incorrect; it should be 'than others'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected for the given part.

× Famous actors of Bollywood Ansina cinema.

✓ famous actors of Bollywood and Chinese cinema.

'Ansina' seems to be a misspelling of 'and Chinese'. The correction fixes this to make the phrase meaningful.

× So people usually like his name and use it as.

✓ So people usually like his name and use it as

The sentence is incomplete; it should continue to explain how people use the name. However, no grammar error in the given part.

× The name for their children and other next generation.

✓ the name for their children and the next generation.

'Other next generation' is incorrect; 'the next generation' is the correct phrase.

× So I think it is same as they are.

✓ So I think it is the same for them.

The phrase 'same as they are' is awkward and unclear. The correction provides a clearer expression.