Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more coherent and natural by avoiding fragmented sentences and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and clarify your points. Also, avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

예시: My first name was inspired by the month I was born, April. Additionally, my middle name comes from a famous artist who was well known in the past. Although my name doesn't have a sentimental meaning, I feel it is connected to important aspects of my family history.

제안: Improve fluency by avoiding pauses and fragmented sentences. Use linking words like 'if' and 'also' properly to make your answer more natural. Provide more specific reasons why you prefer unique names with deep meanings to enrich your response.

예시: If I have children in the future, I would love to combine my name and my husband's name. Also, I would choose a unique name that has a deep and special meaning to strengthen our family bond.

제안: Avoid repetition and fragmented sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Clarify your points with specific details and correct grammar to make your answer more natural and effective.

예시: No one in my family shares the same name as me. However, all our names are connected to months, following a tradition inspired by my father's name, which is also a month. I believe this tradition creates a special bond among us and reflects my mother's love for my father.

제안: Try to avoid fragmented sentences and unclear expressions. Even if you are unsure, give a more structured and coherent answer using linking words. Provide a clearer opinion or example to support your view.

예시: Although I am not very familiar with Chinese naming traditions, I think that the new generation tends to choose more modern names for their children compared to the past.

제안: Avoid fragmented sentences and improve coherence by using linking words. Even if you lack knowledge, try to give a more confident and structured answer with specific reasons or examples.

예시: Although I don't know much about Chinese culture, I believe that names based on family heritage or specific meanings are common, so some names are probably more popular than others in China.

× As for my middle name, it comes from a famous artist who was well known. Way back then.

✓ As for my middle name, it comes from a famous artist who was well known way back then.

The sentence is split incorrectly by a period, creating a fragment 'Way back then.' which is not a complete sentence. Combining the two parts into one sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So overall my name doesn't have a sentiment pal Meaning.

✓ So overall, my name doesn't have a sentimental meaning.

The phrase 'sentiment pal Meaning' is incorrect and unclear. The correct adjective is 'sentimental' and 'meaning' should not be capitalized. Adding a comma after 'overall' improves sentence flow.

× But I think this is just connected.

✓ But I think it is just connected.

The pronoun 'this' is vague here; replacing it with 'it' clarifies the subject. Also, the sentence is incomplete in meaning; however, based on the original, this correction addresses the grammatical issue.

× I would really love to combine my name and my husband name as well.

✓ I would really love to combine my name and my husband's name as well.

The phrase 'my husband name' lacks the possessive form. Adding the apostrophe and 's' to 'husband' correctly shows possession.

× If. Time comes I will have my own children.

✓ If the time comes, I will have my own children.

The sentence is incorrectly split by a period after 'If'. It should be a conditional clause starting with 'If the time comes,' followed by the main clause. Adding 'the' before 'time' and a comma after the clause corrects the sentence.

× Additionally, I would look for a very unique name with a very deep special meaning which will connect to us as a family.

✓ Additionally, I would look for a very unique name with a deep, special meaning that will connect us as a family.

The phrase 'very deep special meaning' is awkward; adding a comma between 'deep' and 'special' clarifies the adjectives. Also, 'which will connect to us' is better expressed as 'that will connect us' for smoother and more natural phrasing.

× However, our names are all connected to the month, which is a tradition inspired by in my father's name.

✓ However, our names are all connected to the month, which is a tradition inspired by my father's name.

The phrase 'inspired by in my father's name' contains an unnecessary preposition 'in'. Removing 'in' corrects the prepositional phrase.

× As his name is also a month.

✓ His name is also a month.

The sentence fragment 'As his name is also a month.' lacks a main clause and is incomplete. Removing 'As' makes it a complete sentence.

× I think this creates a special bond between US and shows how my mother loves my father.

✓ I think this creates a special bond between us and shows how my mother loves my father.

The word 'US' is incorrectly capitalized. It should be lowercase 'us' as a pronoun.

× I really don't have any idea with regards to the Chinese tradition or how Chinese. Made name.

✓ I really don't have any idea with regards to the Chinese tradition or how Chinese make names.

The sentence is split incorrectly by a period after 'Chinese'. Also, 'Made name' is incorrect; the present tense 'make names' fits better here to match the context.

× But I think. With this new generation, I feel like Chinese are getting more. Modern in choosing the names of their children.

✓ But I think with this new generation, I feel like Chinese are getting more modern in choosing the names of their children.

The sentence is incorrectly split by periods after 'think' and 'more'. Combining the parts into one sentence improves flow and grammatical correctness.

× I don't really know much about Chinese or everything around China, but I think.

✓ I don't really know much about Chinese or everything around China, but I think

The sentence ends abruptly with a period after 'think', which is incomplete. It should continue or be rephrased to complete the thought. However, since the original transcript ends here, no correction is possible without additional context.

× Names were often based on family heritage or had specific meanings, so most likely there are names that are more popular than the others.

✓ Names are often based on family heritage or have specific meanings, so most likely there are names that are more popular than others.

The sentence mixes past and present tense inconsistently. Changing 'were' to 'are' and 'had' to 'have' aligns with the present context. Also, 'than the others' is better as 'than others' for natural phrasing.