Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ студента недостаточно структурирован и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует строить предложения более связно, избегать лишних пауз и уточнять смысл имени более чётко.

예시: My name means "reborn" in Greek. I am not sure if it has other meanings, but in Russia, it is considered quite unique.

제안: Ответ содержит много пауз и нечетких выражений. Рекомендуется использовать связные предложения и чётко выражать мысли, избегая повторов.

예시: Choosing a name would be difficult, but I would research the meaning carefully. Then, I would make a list of meaningful names and select the best one for my child.

제안: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Следует использовать правильные выражения и более чётко отвечать на вопрос, избегая лишних слов.

예시: No, no one in my family has the same name as me. In my country, people usually avoid giving children the same names as their parents.

제안: Ответ не структурирован и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует строить предложения логично и использовать связующие слова для плавности речи.

예시: I am not very familiar with Chinese naming traditions, but I think that nowadays, people tend to choose more European or American names instead of traditional local ones.

제안: Ответ неясен и содержит много пауз. Рекомендуется использовать полные предложения и конкретизировать информацию.

예시: I am not sure about popular names in China, but I believe many names have special meanings and reflect certain sounds or traditions.

× Yes, my name is translated from Greek like. Reborn.

✓ Yes, my name is translated from Greek as 'Reborn'.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and punctuation. The phrase 'like. Reborn.' is fragmented and unclear. The correction uses 'as' to indicate the meaning of the name and encloses 'Reborn' in quotes to clarify it is the meaning.

× And. I don't know about other meanings, but it's not so special.

✓ I don't know about other meanings, but it's not very special.

The original sentence starts with 'And.' which is unnecessary and the phrase 'not so special' is informal. The correction removes the conjunction and uses 'not very special' for clarity and correctness.

× Was difficult question but.

✓ It was a difficult question, but...

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'It' as the subject and 'was' as the verb completes the sentence. The comma before 'but' is necessary to connect clauses.

× Uhm, I would of course I would read a word about.

✓ Uhm, of course I would read about the meaning of the name.

The phrase 'would of course I would' is incorrect and redundant. The correction places 'of course' appropriately and clarifies the object of reading.

× Name meaning and maybe I would make a list of morality names and then choose it for my.

✓ the meaning of the name, and maybe I would make a list of meaningful names and then choose one for my...

The phrase 'morality names' is incorrect; likely intended 'meaningful names'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and lacks proper punctuation. The correction clarifies and completes the sentence.

× New generation.

✓ new generation.

The phrase is a fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence for completeness.

× No, in my family. There are no like Neymar bitten at all.

✓ No, in my family there is no one with the name Neymar at all.

The original sentence has incorrect use of 'There are no like Neymar bitten', which is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction uses 'there is no one with the name Neymar' to express the intended meaning.

× All family members have unique names.

✓ All family members have unique names.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× And. In your country like people tried not to use the same name as the previous generation.

✓ And in your country, people try not to use the same names as the previous generation.

The original sentence has unnecessary 'like' and incorrect tense 'tried'. The correction removes 'like' and uses present tense 'try' to match the context.

× I don't know really about Chinese name because I'm from Russia and it's interesting question, but I think that nowadays globally people try to.

✓ I don't really know about Chinese names because I'm from Russia, and it's an interesting question, but I think that nowadays globally people try to...

The original sentence has awkward word order and missing articles. The correction improves word order, adds 'an' before 'interesting question', and pluralizes 'names'.

× Use like more European or American names rises in traditional local names.

✓ use more European or American names rather than traditional local names.

The phrase 'like more European or American names rises in traditional local names' is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction clarifies the intended contrast between European/American names and traditional local names.

× I don't really know about the names that are popular in China, but.

✓ I don't really know about the names that are popular in China, but...

The sentence ends abruptly and should be connected to the following thought for completeness.

× It seems like they had this name that. Our reflect. Sounds.

✓ It seems like they have names that reflect sounds.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction combines the fragments into a coherent sentence.

× And of course, names that made with special meanings.

✓ And of course, names that are made with special meanings.

The original sentence lacks the verb 'are' and is incomplete. The correction adds the verb to complete the sentence.