Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar (e.g., 'do have' should be 'does have'), avoiding redundancy, and making sentences more concise. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, my name is Chandrika, which means 'moonlight' in English. It was given to me by my grandmother and is named after the Indian goddess Laxmi. This makes my name very special to me and my family.

제안: Your answer needs to be more structured and clear. Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases. Use linking words like 'because' or 'therefore' to explain your reasons clearly. Also, try to be more specific about how you would choose the names.

예시: Since I was brought up in India, I would choose names for my children based on Hindu mythology. This is because I want to honour our traditions and show respect to my parents.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating the same idea multiple times. Also, complete your sentences and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: No one in my family has the same name as me. I believe my name is unique, which gives me a strong sense of identity.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to complete your thoughts and avoid filler words. Use linking words to explain the differences clearly and provide specific examples if possible.

예시: I think there are many differences between how Chinese name their children now and in the past. Nowadays, people choose names that are globally popular because the world is more connected, unlike before when traditional names were more common.

제안: Your answer has repetition and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repeating the same words. Use linking words to connect your points and be more specific about popular names.

예시: Many Chinese people follow their culture and Buddhism, so names related to Lord Buddha are very popular. These names are commonly given to children more than others.

× My name is Chandrika Talk way and yes my name do have a special meaning.

✓ My name is Chandrika Talk way and yes my name does have a special meaning.

The verb 'do' should be 'does' to agree with the singular subject 'my name'. In English, third person singular subjects require verbs to have an 's' or 'es' ending in the present tense.

× So if I have to choose a name for my next generation, that would be that would be according to the Hindu mythology and with love and respect to my parents.

✓ So if I have to choose a name for my next generation, it would be according to Hindu mythology and with love and respect to my parents.

The phrase 'that would be that would be' is repetitive and incorrect. Also, 'according to the Hindu mythology' should be 'according to Hindu mythology' as 'mythology' is uncountable here. The pronoun 'it' correctly refers to 'a name'.

× So no, my family, in my family, nobody hasn't, nobody has same name as mine.

✓ So no, in my family, nobody has the same name as mine.

Double negatives like 'nobody hasn't' are incorrect in English. Also, 'same name as mine' requires the definite article 'the' before 'same name'.

× I think my name is very unique. So is is a very unique name and it gives me a sense of I and it gives me a sense of identity and.

✓ I think my name is very unique. So it is a very unique name and it gives me a sense of self and a sense of identity.

The phrase 'sense of I' is incorrect; it should be 'sense of self'. Also, 'is is' is a repetition error. The sentence was incomplete and needed proper ending.

× According to me, as we all know that the world has become a global village, so people tend to follow the trends which are globally acceptable and are are you and are used widely in the world.

✓ According to me, as we all know, the world has become a global village, so people tend to follow trends which are globally acceptable and widely used in the world.

The sentence had repetition 'are are you and are' which is incorrect. Also, 'the trends' can be simplified to 'trends'. The sentence structure was awkward and needed correction for clarity.

× So yes, there have been many differences in the China in in the in names of the Chinese name their children now and in the past, because today the names are more of.

✓ So yes, there have been many differences in the names Chinese people give their children now compared to the past, because today the names are more varied.

The original sentence had repeated words and incomplete ending. The phrase 'in the China in in the in names of the Chinese name their children' is incorrect and confusing. It was restructured for clarity and completeness.

× As Chinese follow is Chinese follow their culture and tradition and the and the worship Buddhism.

✓ As Chinese people follow their culture and tradition and worship Buddhism.

The phrase 'As Chinese follow is Chinese follow' is repetitive and incorrect. 'Chinese' as a noun should be 'Chinese people' for clarity. Also, 'the worship Buddhism' is incorrect; it should be 'worship Buddhism' without 'the'.

× So many of the names are related to Lord Puta and most of the names which are which are given to the children are on the names are on the different names of Lord Buddha.

✓ So many of the names are related to Lord Buddha and most of the names given to the children are different names of Lord Buddha.

The sentence had repetition 'which are which are' and 'are on the names are on the'. Also, 'Lord Puta' is a misspelling of 'Lord Buddha'. The sentence was corrected for clarity and accuracy.

× So they are they are more popular than others.

✓ So they are more popular than others.

The phrase 'they are they are' is repetitive and incorrect. Removing the repetition corrects the sentence.